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ashlyntalksbooks's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Animal cruelty, Animal death, Death, Drug use, Gore, Homophobia, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Rape, Sexual assault, Blood, Grief, Stalking, Murder, Gaslighting, and Injury/Injury detail
sunsetcypress's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
I can understand how his style wouldn't be for everyone and I hesitate to recommend it because of that, but it certainly hit the jackpot with me. In more concrete terms, his prose integrates elements that some readers might find abrasive or annoying - but I simply think them funny or even endearing. He is constantly repeating certain ideas or themes (WHAT HAPPENED TO ME. TO US. IN THE AUTUMN OF 1981. DURING OUR SENIOR YEAR AT BUCKLEY.) (???!!) (THE HOUSE ON MULHOLLAND DRIVE - this is just his own house, but it's never "home" or "my house", it's always THE HOUSE ON MULHOLLAND DRIVE) (~~~PARADISAICAL~~~) (((EMPIRE)))) (THE TANGIBLE PARTICIPANT) etc. He is constantly describing in great detail what everyone is wearing all the time, is regularly referencing songs or movies or the pop culture of the time, going so far as integrating the lyrics themselves to describe a certain mood or feeling (is that not the most teenage girl-ish thing you can think of?) (affectionate). He is eternally horny and jacking off, yearns and daydreams all day, writes in run-in sentences that go on forever because he gets distracted or is trying to shove as many images and concepts in the same breath. For instance, there is an entire scene in which he meticulously describes going to see "The Shining" when it came out, his relationship with the book, the whole anticipation and wait for the movie, whom he invited, the car he drove there, how the theater looked like, how long the line was, where he sat etc. For that reason, the book's pacing is rather slow, which other readers might find frustrating, but for me this choice was excellent and really helped built up the atmosphere of creeping fear and paranoia until its convulsive resolution. I read a comment on one of the subreddits that resonated with me - saying how B.E.E is one of the few people that can accurately capture the teenage voice without sliding into YA territory and it's indeed all there, in the casual selfishness and self-absorption, the hedonism, the breakdown in communication - the drama of it all.
As a slice of life, this novel is, again, fantastic. The picaresque descriptions of Los Angeles during that specific interval of 1980-1981 were so compelling, even for someone like me, who has no interest in that city whatsoever. But BEE's voice and his genuine attachment to those places radiate off the page and I soon found myself on Google Maps, looking up all the many geographical locations he regularly mentioned. The depiction of early 1980s LA high society really exhibits the concept of "empire" that appears throughout the text - the unbridled extravagance, self-indulgence, the excessive drug consumption, regular driving under the influence of all kinds of substances (alcohol abuse being the mildest thing), the frequent unprotected sex, the unlimited money these teenagers had access to, the lack of parental supervision to the point of quasi-abandonment etc. This period was before the Reagan administration's escalation on the war on drugs and it was only in the summer of 1981 when HIV/AIDS was beginning to get press attention -- and it wasn't even known by that name yet, but by "pneumonia" and later "GRID". A very stark contrast to how society changed just a few years later. When Bret is talking about the "end of a dream", it doesn't just convey the end of adolescence and the entering into the world of adults. The world of "The Shards" really feels like sitting on a precipice. And there is a wistful, melancholy, somber quality to the prose, despite its sparsity and lack of embellishment, that deplores the loss of innocence - not in the sense of moral purity, but of the simplicity bestowed by being untroubled and light-hearted and free.
Of course, this book being autofiction will always grip readers by making them ponder what exactly is lifted straight from real life and what is pure hyperbole. The serial killer plotline is definitely fiction, but there are parts of the book that feel very real and a lot to unpack - like the author is trying to process his own personal traumas of the past. Are the Trawler and Robert Mallory artistic exaggerations of some real past drama that led to the dissolution of the author's social circle? The text certainly invites the reader to consider all manner of speculation, both in the Watsonian and the Doylist sense.
One last point of criticism I've encountered is the alleged flatness of the female characters. I, for one, did not feel that at all: it was more like our unreliable narrator is simply a gay, closeted teenager, who is trying to navigate his own issues surrounding social acceptance in a largely homophobic environment and, as a result, cannot genuinely and completely access the inner worlds of his female friends. But Debbie and Susan are precisely suggested to have these interior landscapes that go beyond the images they are projecting. Debbie has an entire life independent of her boyfriend, with her own interests, different social circles and family issues, while Susan's offhand remarks and perceptiveness suggest that she is more cerebral than the aesthetic narrator Bret associates with her - "numbness as a feeling". Whenever there is a crisis, she seems to be the first one to act: when Robert is having his breakdown in the pool, when Terry screams she is the first one to exit the room,
In any case, beyond the whodunnit, the novel does pose an interesting question about The Writer's need (or anybody's, really) to construct logical narratives out of the random occurrences in their lives, sometimes to the point of self-delusion and also as a counter-weight to what our protagonist considers superficial, soulless "scripts" that people follow out of a need for social conformity or empty politeness (i.e. replacing one fake narrative imposed from the outside with a different fake narrative originated from the self, that somehow feels "truer" because it is an own creation).
Last but not least. Gay rights!!!
Moderate: Gore
patrickreads89's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Death, Drug use, Gore, Mental illness, Sexual content, Suicide, Violence, Blood, Stalking, Murder, and Toxic friendship
ktdakotareads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
2.5
Graphic: Addiction, Animal cruelty, Animal death, Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, Gore, Infidelity, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual assault, Toxic relationship, Blood, Grief, Murder, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
aristarcodisamo's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Addiction, Adult/minor relationship, Alcoholism, Animal cruelty, Animal death, Body horror, Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, Gore, Physical abuse, Sexual content, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Stalking, Murder, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Cursing, Homophobia, Infidelity, Mental illness, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual violence, Gaslighting, Sexual harassment, and Classism
Minor: Racism, Vomit, Antisemitism, Car accident, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, Schizophrenia/Psychosis , and Outing
kittiesss's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Drug use, Gore, Homophobia, Mental illness, Blood, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Stalking and Suicide attempt
ablomso96's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Drug abuse, Drug use, Gore, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Suicide, Violence, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
emiliaborsikova's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Body horror, Drug abuse, Drug use, Gore, Mental illness, Sexual content, Suicide, Torture, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Stalking, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Addiction, Alcoholism, Homophobia, Forced institutionalization, Car accident, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, Gaslighting, and Toxic friendship
Minor: Rape, Vomit, and Sexual harassment
crazedocelot's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Death, Drug use, Gore, Blood, and Injury/Injury detail
giuliamrll's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Body horror, Death, Drug use, Gore, Gun violence, Torture, Violence, and Kidnapping