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fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
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i have typed up this review with all the due resepct this shit ass cockmogling author and book deservse. smile of color.
ok so the author us white so o dont have many high expectations for this book but its and hour long read so meh.
very ya immature writing style. the fucking book summary is better written than the book.
the author is incredibly gratuitous with starting new chapters. it feels like every new scene change it's a new chapter. it's rather exhausting to read this way.
no wonder my moonreader app said this would be an hour read. it has a lot if rambling quirky white girl filler. if this was decently edited, it would be ten pages long.
mc feels like a stereotype of a Mary sue back in the 90s
at chapter 12 I started rapidly skipping through pages. you dont even need to read it, just get the vibe of what part of the story arc you're in.
all the horror has no tension. it's repeatedly told to you that a thing occurred, usually a common trope, and that it's scary.
that's thousand school is described to you. that's it. the rest of the story is just the mc telling you how she feels and what her thoughts are. it's very static and dull.
I give up at chapter 23. this isn't fun even to hate read. nothing happens and I'm not given motive to care. this feels like a immatute white girl trying to relive her days in high schools.
content warnings
minor white settlers, slavery / harry potter reference, ablest c slur, paranoia, dogs, suicide ideation, antisemitism in flat earth theory shit, anti black racism referring to the closed religion Vodou,
medium classism, antisemitism, misogyny, divorce, house fires, death,
major lesbophobia,
i have typed up this review with all the due resepct this shit ass cockmogling author and book deservse. smile of color.
ok so the author us white so o dont have many high expectations for this book but its and hour long read so meh.
very ya immature writing style. the fucking book summary is better written than the book.
the author is incredibly gratuitous with starting new chapters. it feels like every new scene change it's a new chapter. it's rather exhausting to read this way.
no wonder my moonreader app said this would be an hour read. it has a lot if rambling quirky white girl filler. if this was decently edited, it would be ten pages long.
mc feels like a stereotype of a Mary sue back in the 90s
at chapter 12 I started rapidly skipping through pages. you dont even need to read it, just get the vibe of what part of the story arc you're in.
all the horror has no tension. it's repeatedly told to you that a thing occurred, usually a common trope, and that it's scary.
that's thousand school is described to you. that's it. the rest of the story is just the mc telling you how she feels and what her thoughts are. it's very static and dull.
I give up at chapter 23. this isn't fun even to hate read. nothing happens and I'm not given motive to care. this feels like a immatute white girl trying to relive her days in high schools.
content warnings
minor white settlers, slavery / harry potter reference, ablest c slur, paranoia, dogs, suicide ideation, antisemitism in flat earth theory shit, anti black racism referring to the closed religion Vodou,
medium classism, antisemitism, misogyny, divorce, house fires, death,
major lesbophobia,
Content Warnings
Graphic: Lesbophobia
Moderate: Antisemitism, Misogyny, Fire/Fire injury, and Death
Minor: Colonisation, Transphobia, Ableism, Suicidal thoughts, and Antisemitism
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