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To Shape a Dragon's Breath by Moniquill Blackgoose

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gabe_escobedo's review against another edition

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dark emotional funny inspiring fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

A stellar book, highly recommended. A beautiful exploration of colonization and the resistance of oppression, even by undesirable means of working with the oppressors

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capriqueen's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.0

Compelling and rich. I really really love the characters, especially Sander. Anequs is bi and polyam, which I love, and also a total badass, which I also love. Her refusal to bend her morals or beliefs was so riveting

The romantic subplots, while minor overall, are really interesting and I can’t wait to see where they go

The prejudice and institutional racism and white propaganda at every turn was disheartening and infuriating, and really well portrayed. Since the setting of the book is our world but a bit different, it really puts our world and history into perspective

Speaking of the world, the book comes with a map, a pronunciation guide, and a period table of athers (elements), but it really could’ve used a glossary. Some vocabulary is the same as ours (fabrics and animals, for example) but a lot isn’t, and trying to figure out what we call things was frustrating (anglereckoning is geometry, erelore is history, skiltakraft is alchemy, kolfni is carbon, etc). Half the time I just let my mind glaze over the unfamiliar terms, especially the chapter which covered Anequs’s entire first lesson of skiltakraft in exact unintelligible (to the reader) detail

The tone of the book feels almost a little detached, the sentence structure fairly basic. I think this is intentional, but it means a lot of narration is covered by “this happened, and the next day this happened”

Regardless, the world and the story and the characters still captured me and I look forward to the next book

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scramuel058's review against another edition

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adventurous reflective tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0


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jjvaldezbooks's review against another edition

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adventurous inspiring tense medium-paced
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.5

it has the same small issues as Raybearer-- the themes/lessons are often a bit too on the nose, even for YA, and because there is so much happening packed into book 1 of a series, the protagonist has very little time to make mistakes that she can learn from. Redemptor (sequel to Raybearer) solved that for me and I'm hoping Blackgoose will similarly find her stride in a second book.  

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grace_b_3's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

This is basically an alternate history of colonial America but with dragons and a lot of names changed. Going into this book, I was under the impression that it was a secondary world, but the map at the beginning is literally the same as our world. 
I enjoyed the ride of this book, but there were definitely some flaws. The world-building was kind of clunky. There are lots of long paragraphs of exposition. The main character, Anequs, has that problem where she says and does whatever she wants, and even when there should be consequences, she somehow gets out of them. She is never paying attention to the political ramifications of her actions.

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dragongirl271's review

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adventurous challenging emotional tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.25


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chasinggrace's review against another edition

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reflective tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

A Native American-inspired coming-of-age story with dragons and British-inspired academia. 

This book reminded me a lot of Babel by R. F. Kuang. There was a heavy, heavy dose of racism that the main character(s) had to endure, and complex side characters that gave insight into how different personalities navigate a colonialist society. This book, in the latter half, became heavily political as well. 

Of course, I enjoyed the dragons in this book. They seemed to have distinct personalities and I appreciated how they were tied to their owners. I also liked how Anequs, our main character, was very vocal. She refused to assimilate to colonial society and was very good at advocating for herself. The cast was also extremely diverse - other than race, there were LGBTQIA+ characters, neurodivergent characters, and a clear socioeconomic divide between many people. 

What distracted me from the story was the heavy writing style. Somehow, it worked for me in Babel and did not work for me here. The magic/dragon system was complex, as were the explanations of the local politics. The dialogue was stiff, and the descriptions of surroundings were long-winded. It took me almost a week to read this book, when I can usually consume novels that I enjoy in 1-3 days. Lots of things happen TO our main character and she is forced to play an observational role that can get stale after 400+ pages. In the end, I am not invested enough in the politics or budding romances to read the next installment. 

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lpdx's review

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adventurous slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.0


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magicant's review

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I just cannot handle the colonization and bigotry within the book due to my mental health. I plan on coming back for this book though.

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znvisser's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

This wasn’t the fastest read for me; I was a bit impatient for all world building (never my fave) and was happy when Anequs finally arrived in her new environment so the action could get started.

The world building is elaborate but all very…. Neat, I guess? Anequs is a flawless superior child being miles ahead in logic and intelligence from anyone in her new environment (yet her need to show this to everyone who already hates her for her heritage never leads to actual problems - except for me as a reader, being annoyed by her boring superiority); most geography, science and linguistics appear just slight variations of the actual world, and even the racism and kolonialism racisms and kolonialisms precisely as it does in the real world. 

In a way this is all fine - it probably made it all relatively easy to follow and helps laying ground for plot, but it also made all of it… quite unsurprising, at some time close to uninteresting? There was little friction, struggle or mystery, and it all just floats on (sometime there is drama over nothing and then it turns out to be… nothing indeed); it made me wish for accelerated plot development but we just kept learning new Anglish words for known concepts (I really would have preferred a glossary over the pronunciation guide). Maybe I’m just looking for more complexity than what YA is for; and these characters sure didn’t provide that, suffering from being either flat or incoherent.

However, it wasn’t not entertaining either: I was somehow invested enough to see where it would go, and it is a good set up for a further series - let’s see if enough of this sticks for me to be eager to pick that up by the time it comes out. But this did count a lot of pages for it to turn out not much more than a set-up for the actual story.

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