jadareyes1's review against another edition
5.0
4.5 - 5 / you have GOT to be kidding me!!! i loved this so much!!!!
there was an interview kahn did recently with The Creative Independent, where she talked abt poetry existing on the margins of art or the literary world or something like that and after reading this, i think she's right. so many of the poems in here became my favorite poems in the world and i will revisit them. i learned so many new words, so many different ways to use words. this was/is pure experimentation.
my favs:
You Don't Know How To Make Love
Women In Public (!!!!!)
Everything Feels Important To A Tiny Person
The Lamp Shade Is Sitting Badly On Its Lamp
Francis Bacon (!!!!)
It Takes A Real Man To Be A Little Girl (!!!!!)
Visioning
Sixty Five Percent Of What I Throw Away Is Compost
Your Joke Is A Lake, Your Rule Blew Up A Gas Station (!!!!!)
In Life We Are The Stories That We Tell About Ourselves
Jack & Diane (!!!!!)
Asperity (!!!!!!)
Milk (!!!!!)
Name Like An Empty Bag (!!!!!!)
there was an interview kahn did recently with The Creative Independent, where she talked abt poetry existing on the margins of art or the literary world or something like that and after reading this, i think she's right. so many of the poems in here became my favorite poems in the world and i will revisit them. i learned so many new words, so many different ways to use words. this was/is pure experimentation.
my favs:
You Don't Know How To Make Love
Women In Public (!!!!!)
Everything Feels Important To A Tiny Person
The Lamp Shade Is Sitting Badly On Its Lamp
Francis Bacon (!!!!)
It Takes A Real Man To Be A Little Girl (!!!!!)
Visioning
Sixty Five Percent Of What I Throw Away Is Compost
Your Joke Is A Lake, Your Rule Blew Up A Gas Station (!!!!!)
In Life We Are The Stories That We Tell About Ourselves
Jack & Diane (!!!!!)
Asperity (!!!!!!)
Milk (!!!!!)
Name Like An Empty Bag (!!!!!!)
ghostmallfountain's review against another edition
3.0
I had a lot of trouble connecting with these, but enjoyed the poet’s unique approach to language. Although I appreciate her commitment to a flowing, brazen, almost humorous style, the title poem and last poem were the most grounded in reality, and thus most moving to me.
amandam's review
2.0
There are some stunners here, especially the title poem, but the book was not as tight and cohesive as it could be.
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