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kindleandcrochet's review
So the premise of the book seemed like such a good idea but the execution was not there. I only got 50 pages in because the story seemed to jump between scenes with no flow. There has already been a drive by shooting, Rena oulled a gun and now her friend has smuggled her out of her house for a spa day...
There was a scene with Rena and Sante where he went to get her from her mothers house, we saw Sante talking to her mother and Rean screaming at him, then suddenly they were at the car then suddenly they were driving... Absolutely no flow at all, it was very disjointed.
Rena's daring escape from her home with her friend Nikki was bland and fae to quick. Like where was the adrenaline? The sneaking? The escape took all of 3 pages and that included the very random conversation between Rena and Nikki.
Overall it felt disjointed and had zero flow and i just couldn't get into it
There was a scene with Rena and Sante where he went to get her from her mothers house, we saw Sante talking to her mother and Rean screaming at him, then suddenly they were at the car then suddenly they were driving... Absolutely no flow at all, it was very disjointed.
Rena's daring escape from her home with her friend Nikki was bland and fae to quick. Like where was the adrenaline? The sneaking? The escape took all of 3 pages and that included the very random conversation between Rena and Nikki.
Overall it felt disjointed and had zero flow and i just couldn't get into it
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