The design and UX isn't done, Rob and Abbie, okkurrrr! 😌
ltg584's review against another edition
I hate to say it, but I'm going to DNF this book for now. The cover is wonderful, the writing style is enchanting. However, it is in serious need of a round of edits. There are facts being repeated, there's a lot of info dumping (to teach the reader all they need to know about complex magic), and I was kind of turned off by the repeated comments on how fat or flabby Susan's new body is, compared to her old one. It needs to be tightened up a bit, but otherwise is a really great concept.
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