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A Fragile Enchantment by Allison Saft

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aggressive_nostalgia's review against another edition

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fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes

1.75

Thoughts that have been bouncing around in my head since I finished this yesterday:

  • Plot threads just got dropped. (Niamh is dying? Except maybe it’s treatable and she isn’t? This is used for a couple of dramatic heartstring-tugging conversations and then never resolved!) // (Niamh wanted to make a better life for her family but in the end she’s semi-estranged from them and that’s fine I guess…?) // (Whatever happened to Erin? She abandoned her job and goes back to Machland but the tension Niamh felt about it for half the book just fizzled?)

  • The speed at which things happen (relationally and especially politically) strains credulity. Impossible to be invested in any of it when nearly everything gets resolved (relatively) quickly and it turns out there are no people acting in bad faith at all except everyone’s terrible absent dads. It feels like the author wanted to rush ahead to the payoff but failed to lay enough foundation for it, so the reader can’t properly enjoy it.

  • I was confused about the princes’ backstory. I didn’t really understand why their relationship was so strained or their communication was so bad, why Kit stayed away from court for so long (he mentions that after his mom’s death, people expected him to snap, so he did? But he never says what that means or exactly what happened?). Kit and Niamh would have these emotional conversations and act like they’d had some relational breakthrough, but I didn’t understand what was actually being communicated?

  • According to Niamh, Machland “doesn’t have anything for us” - everyone is poor and sad and is either leaving or wants to leave - not just small rural towns, but the whole country?? The “best” thing is for Machlish people to move to Avaland even though they just fought a war to be independent and the people in Avaland treat them with racism and contempt and they’re second-class citizens??? …wtf?????

  • This was a mild annoyance by comparison with the plot/character issues (since it’s a fantasy and not a straight historical novel) but if you’re looking for Regency period vibes, this is not it. Class divisions were supposed to be a significant part of this plot, but it was incredibly loosey-goosey. Everyone’s on a first-name basis and no one stood on formality. Propriety was a suggestion rather than a rule. On top of the slangy dialogue, it felt incredibly modern with some superficial Regency-inspired trappings. The historical inspiration was clearer in the plot than the atmosphere. 

This feels almost like a rough draft. Obviously it was edited for structure, grammar, et cetera - but the plot and pacing are not nearly as coherent as they should or could be. Ideas are stuck into the story and not fleshed out. Really disappointing. 

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callistag1's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.75


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nakole's review against another edition

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emotional funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted reflective slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.5

 𝓕𝓻𝓪𝓰𝓲𝓵𝓮 𝓔𝓷𝓬𝓱𝓪𝓷𝓽𝓶𝓮𝓷𝓽
By: Allison Saft
Contemporary Regency Romance

𝒪𝓋𝑒𝓇𝒶𝓁𝓁 3.5/5
𝒮𝓅𝒾𝒸𝑒 1/5

JUNE BOOK CLUB PICK

𝑅𝑒𝓋𝒾𝑒𝓌: This book was pretty good, it was giving major Bridgeton vibes. I was giggling and kicking my feet at points. There were a couple plot points that just didn’t give everything they could have. For one Niamh’s friend was really hyped in the beginning and we more from/about her maybe once or twice. Also the fact that Niamh’s magic will eventually kill her, which is made to seem really important in the synopsis, just kind of is and that is it. Also Rosa was my favorite character and I can’t actually give you a concrete reason why.

𝒜 𝐹𝒶𝓋𝑜𝓇𝒾𝓉𝑒 𝒬𝓊𝑜𝓉𝑒:
“I’m all thorns.” 
“I don’t know about that. I think you’re more like a weed.” 
“Is that supposed to make me feel better?” 
“Yes! Weeds are…tenacious. They survive against all odds, wherever they land, no matter how many times you cut them down. And sometimes they can be quite beautiful.”

𝒯𝓇𝑜𝓅𝑒𝓈: GrumpyXSunshine; Enemies to Lovers; LGBTQIA+ Rep; Slow Burn; Forbidden Romance; Forced Proximity; Regency Era; RoyalXCommoner

𝒯𝓇𝒾𝑔𝑔𝑒𝓇 𝒲𝒶𝓇𝓃𝒾𝓃𝑔𝓈: Terminal Illness; Chronic Illness; Infidelity; Blackmail; Death of a Parent; Alcoholism; Xenophobia; Sexual Content (minor)(consensual);Violence (minor); Child Abuse (minor); Colonization(mentioned)

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mels_reading_log's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny hopeful fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.5

This book really surprised me with how great it is, because I have not heard anyone talking about it. It is Bridgerton with a little bit of magic. Niamh is a seamstress who is able to magically embed feelings into her embroidery, making her designs not only gorgeous but breathtaking. She has been hired to create the wedding looks for the youngest prince and his soon to be wife. Years ago her people were taken over and they suffer to this day of poverty and racism, so not everyone is happy that she was brought to the palace for this esteemed job. The first time she meets the prince to discuss his wedding attire he is rude and does not seem interested at all. But maybe that is just because he has grown used to feeling empty and she makes him feel more.

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drtx_bwt's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful lighthearted tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? N/A
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A

4.25


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ziracrow's review against another edition

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emotional funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted reflective tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5


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olivanna_creations's review against another edition

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emotional funny medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5


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dani_reis's review against another edition

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emotional lighthearted mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25


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becca_w_'s review against another edition

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emotional funny mysterious tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0


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ellejo3's review against another edition

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This is a colonizer/colonized romance where the colonized FMC is working herself to death to support her struggling family. I couldn’t get past it and would’ve DNF’d it if it hadn’t been an arc.
The fact that she’s working herself to death never changes either. For all we know, she could die the day after the book ends. It seems like Saft is trying to treat this like a terminal illness, but the fact that it’s only happening so she can support her family who’s struggling due to the effects of colonization left a sour taste in my mouth.
There’s also a lot of homophobia, which is unnecessary and tiring in a fantasy world. 

Thank you to Netgalley for giving me an arc in exchange for my thoughts. 

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