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caffeinatedvibe's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
3.0
I liked the concept, the multiple perspective from the same person but different times, and the mystery behind it all. But I don’t think it satisfies me as much I would have liked. I definitely enjoyed it and would recommend it to friends I just felt like it ended abruptly right as I thought maybe the heart of the story was beginning.
Graphic: Death
Moderate: Child death, Death, Racism, and Murder
Child deathcaseythereader's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Graphic: Ableism, Bullying, Confinement, Death, Fatphobia, Gun violence, Racial slurs, Racism, Sexism, Suicide, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Kidnapping, Grief, Car accident, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
mandkips's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Racial slurs and Racism
Moderate: Gore and Violence
Minor: Death
oatmilkdyke's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Death, Racial slurs, Racism, and Death of parent
Moderate: Gore, Slavery, Violence, Murder, and War
beanjoles's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.0
The best part of this book is the expressive and interesting writing style. Characterization was not very good — there was a lot of Telling and next to no Showing. That isn’t unexpected in a novel that depends on first-person narration, but at many points I felt like I was reading Lou’s collected essays about her life experiences rather than going through the experiences with her. Lou constantly seems disconnected from her actions and environment, and this makes it difficult for a reader to care about them either.
The dispassionate descriptions of her day-to-day life were boring. There were teases of interesting things to come (I kept waiting for Sarah and Lou to have a more obvious overall aside from
Finally, it felt like there were a lot of bits of modern commentary that, while important, were jarringly out of place in 1930s LA. I’d have expected them to come from Sarah rather than Lou. The result is that I never felt like Lou was an authentic character. This is one area in the imbalance between showing and telling was particularly evident. Had we seen Lou develop her opinions and positions in response to events it would have been more interesting and realistic.
I probably wouldn’t recommend this book to others, but I wouldn’t rule out reading more by Natasha Deon. She’s clearly a talented writer and the concept was there. This story just wasn’t executed well.
Graphic: Racial slurs, Racism, and Xenophobia
isabelgalupo's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Racism and Xenophobia
Moderate: Racial slurs and Religious bigotry