esher14's review against another edition
1.0
No. Just no. The storyline itself was fine, but the style of writing just seemed really... off to me. Every other sentence was a fragment, and sometimes I could barely understand what was being explained. I just wanted a quick read, but I was hoping I would enjoy it.
oldgum101's review against another edition
2.0
Barely has any tension nearing the climax. Riley is a dull protagonist, even for a YA. I'll still be picking up the next one to see if it gets better.
samsbookjournal's review against another edition
3.0
Cute for a children's story.
I enjoyed reading The Immortals series, so I decided to give this series a try since it's related. Definitely doesn't hit my age range, so I doubt I'll finish the series.
I enjoyed reading The Immortals series, so I decided to give this series a try since it's related. Definitely doesn't hit my age range, so I doubt I'll finish the series.
lawbooks600's review against another edition
3.0
6.5/10, didn't feel like a compelling enough fantasy story.
celenac's review against another edition
1.0
This was a quick read (read it within hours). I enjoyed this book when i was reading it, but after I finished it I found that not much actually happened. It was very anti-climatic.
mikaylamarie's review against another edition
OMG!!!!!!!! This book was so amazing. I can't wait to read Shimmer coming out next year!
alyssa_watson's review against another edition
3.0
I did not really enjoy this book and I doubt I will continue reading this series. It is not that it is a children's book, I read those often enough just because I'm bored, but rather the main character, Riley, is not compelling to me. She acts like I would expect of a twelve year old, but she is just not interesting as an adult. I do think some children may would like this book, but it is not my style.
socialturtle's review against another edition
5.0
It is an awesome book. I love how she created the book!!!