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agathacoss's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
mysterious
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse
Minor: Alcoholism, Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Abortion, and Abandonment
adancewithsquirrels's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
So um... Did I miss something or could a lot of things be handled way easier if those sapphires really are THAT powerful?
If Kelsey can just casually destroy a bridge why did she not try to destroy the enemy's weapons? I get that maybe the Red Queen kept her from doing that but the Queen hadn't been with her army most of the time so why not before?
Also... was the Fetch just suddenly walking around without his mask in the end and Mace didn't seem surprised at all? Or was that some other mysterious handsome dude who could get in anywhere he wants undetected?
I'm not sure I like where this all seems to be going but maybe it'll surprise me.
Also... was the Fetch just suddenly walking around without his mask in the end and Mace didn't seem surprised at all? Or was that some other mysterious handsome dude who could get in anywhere he wants undetected?
I'm not sure I like where this all seems to be going but maybe it'll surprise me.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Homophobia, Rape, Self harm, Sexual violence, and Violence
Moderate: Child abuse
Minor: Pedophilia
h_scharff's review against another edition
dark
inspiring
reflective
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
3.75
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Child abuse, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Drug abuse, Drug use, Gore, Hate crime, Homophobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Blood, Trafficking, Religious bigotry, Medical trauma, Murder, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
applecor's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Rape and Sexual violence
Moderate: Child abuse
katrinarose's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
mysterious
reflective
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Another three star rating for the second book. Again, I did enjoy this book but its’ problems were too big for me to go up another star. First the good: I like Lily’s point of view and always found myself looking forward to her perspective. I enjoyed learning about the world before the crossing and trying to predict how the crossing would happen. The writing style was straightforward yet engaging and kept me picking the book back up even in slow parts. However, the magic made no sense. The sapphires seem to play a big part of the magic system since that’s how Kelsea has power yet it’s never explained in a way that justifies their power. It almost seems like Kelsey all of a sudden is unstoppable which makes her decisions even more questionable. The villain(s) were also very weak and unbelievable which kind of made the whole Kelsea storyline weaker. I have hope that the last book will really pull everything together but I can’t say at this point that I’d recommend this series to anyone, even though I have enjoyed it for the most part.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Gun violence, Homophobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, Violence, Religious bigotry, Murder, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Child abuse, Cursing, Domestic abuse, Racism, Slavery, Xenophobia, Blood, Medical content, Kidnapping, and Classism
lady_sharp's review against another edition
The book is mostly fine, in that sewage is mostly rainwater. Most of it is perfectly competent court intrigue/post apocalyptic fantasy with interesting characters, but it'll occasionally float by that the man who told a teenager she was too ugly to rape is meant to be a charming rogue (and her reaction to this is to be disappointed he finds her ugly....tip to writers: teenagers are hormonal, not complete idiots), the only people of color are harem-owning slavers despite it making no sense worldbuilding-wise, the albino woman just exists for us to gawk at how unnatural she is, and the obsession with evil female vanity that would make a fundamentalist Puritan proud. I'll give it credit, it was well-written enough that I spent a truly inordinate amount of time thinking that these things would be challenged later on...but it seems not. And I don't think I could stomach one more scene of a woman going doe-eyed over a man that treats her like garbage.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Homophobia, Rape, Self harm, Sexual content, Torture, Religious bigotry, and War
Moderate: Ableism
mazomazli's review against another edition
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
I’m really not sure how I made it to the end and still want to read the next book. I found a lot of the worldbuilding to be the main reason I kept going because I want to know how things came to be. However this book is very much packed full with triggering content, often done carelessly and thrown in for what feels like shock factor. The main character is not likable at all, though I’ve never liked her to begin with. Here are the following that the author did that doesn’t sit right with me:
- constant obsession with beauty equaling goodness and fat phobia (only when the main character loses weight and magically takes on someone else’s appearance is she pretty) and the other evil queen would never be beautiful. How tragic to be ugly I suppose.
- one of the most graphic homophobia scenes I’ve ever read. A gay church member is castrated and his wound is left to get infected. There was no reason to put this in. There’s no commentary it’s just to show how evil the new church leader is
- graphic rape and constant sexual assault. Graphic domestic violence in full detail. Repeatedly.
- graphic self harm that is also deeply concerning because it seems the main character is always reopening her wounds by the slightest movements. There was no need to describe her start into it.
- bizarre portrayal of a woman with albinism being magical and wicked and very sexual…?! That was deeply uncomfortable and I think ableist
- stereotypical orientalism with describing a neighboring king of having a harem with 20+ wives and how the main character was offered to be the highest rank
- improper “seizure” care where they held down the MC and put things in her mouth - huge no’s
- slavery is used as a casual tool
And so much more.
Jonathan deserved better than to meet an end of self sacrifice.
- constant obsession with beauty equaling goodness and fat phobia (only when the main character loses weight and magically takes on someone else’s appearance is she pretty) and the other evil queen would never be beautiful. How tragic to be ugly I suppose.
- one of the most graphic homophobia scenes I’ve ever read. A gay church member is castrated and his wound is left to get infected. There was no reason to put this in. There’s no commentary it’s just to show how evil the new church leader is
- graphic rape and constant sexual assault. Graphic domestic violence in full detail. Repeatedly.
- graphic self harm that is also deeply concerning because it seems the main character is always reopening her wounds by the slightest movements. There was no need to describe her start into it.
- bizarre portrayal of a woman with albinism being magical and wicked and very sexual…?! That was deeply uncomfortable and I think ableist
- stereotypical orientalism with describing a neighboring king of having a harem with 20+ wives and how the main character was offered to be the highest rank
- improper “seizure” care where they held down the MC and put things in her mouth - huge no’s
- slavery is used as a casual tool
And so much more.
Jonathan deserved better than to meet an end of self sacrifice.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Body horror, Child abuse, Child death, Death, Domestic abuse, Fatphobia, Gore, Hate crime, Homophobia, Misogyny, Pedophilia, Rape, Self harm, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, Violence, Blood, Religious bigotry, Sexual harassment, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Moderate: Ableism, Animal death, Racism, Slavery, Vomit, Abortion, Dysphoria, and War
greymalkin's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
mysterious
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
I really enjoyed the Lily sections. I found her story interesting and her internal life compelling. The slow evolution of her journey had a compelling energy that made those sections fly by.
However... Kelsea. Sigh. I had so enjoyed in the previous book that she was naïve but not the usual impetuous YA heroine who refuses to listen to smart people or learn from her mistakes. Alas that is all gone now.Kelsea seems determined to make up for lost time by making incredibly stupid mistakes and decisions over and over and over again. She never once learns from her mistakes and hundreds (perhaps thousands) of people die.
I also am increasingly uncomfortable with the author's internalized misogyny and obsession with rape. You'd think that this is a book that celebrates the power of women but it's on the surface. The author/book constantly rapes and brutalizes the female characters, and makes them insecure and fragile and obsessed with their appearance or babies to the detriment of their ability to function or think clearly. The competent, reasonable people are all men with the exception of a young girl (who was sexually and emotionally abused by her father) and that girl's mother (who is mostly reduced to role of tired nursemaid in this book instead of the fascinating prickly brave woman she was written as in the first book). And Lily. Lily is horrifically abused and yet she decides to do something incredibly brave and turns out to be extremely smart and skilled.
I also really disliked Kelsea's non-consensual having sex with Penn. Ugh. She's his Queen and his direct employee/servant as close guard. The power dynamic is absolutely not at all allowing him to have a real choice in the matter despite her "I'm not Queen now" whispers. The whole thing was really distasteful to me. And I was already not really happy about where they went with Penn even before they started having sex. All of a sudden he's in love with her and has to go visit a prostitute or someone to get jacked off regularly so he can be around the person he loves without being aroused all the time I guess? Wow, okay. That's... something. He's not a teenager, does he have no bodily control? I was hoping that the real reason he'd refused her was that he was gay. They even talked about it right after he refuses her the first time and it would have been a really nice way for that situation to be negotiated. And Mace should have pulled him off of close guard duty right away. He says that it's something that happens a lot with close guards. That totally makes sense. But it also can't possibly have been a situation where it turns out well often enough that he'd tolerate it. It seems like such a security weakness.
I'm uncomfortable with the inclusion of self-harm as a way for Kelsea to deal with things. That is a very real issue and Kelsea is hiding it and forcing the only person who knows (Penn) to not talk about it (gee, doesn't that tell her anything about how much he can't consent to sex with her even if he is in love with her?). It is modeling a very troubling coping mechanism in a way that makes it seem acceptable, and I worry about that. The book/author makes it clear that drugging yourself against the pain of an abusive husband and shitty oppressive world is not acceptable so I know this book/author can let readers know when something is not a healthy coping strategy.
The whole magic/sapphires/suddenly Kelsea can do anything she needs to do to solve the plot problem at the time (deus ex... sapphires?) was annoying. Kelsea never needed to compromise or listen to her advisors or learn from her mistakes because she could simply heal the dying or blow up bridges or escape into a convenient vision or telepathically violate people and learn their deepest secrets or paralyze people or ... sigh. I didn't hate it because I'm hoping there's a good reason it works like that, but it feels like really lazy writing in this book.
I did really like learning more about the Crossing and finally getting payoff for all the "modern world" hints that were sprinkled throughout the first book. I didn't find the switch to the "modern America" jarring or unexpected, it was fun, and with Kelsea being so intolerable, I honestly enjoyed those sections more, even with Lily being so brutalized.
I'm reading the third one but only for Lily. And Aisa, my ferocious stabby girl.
However... Kelsea. Sigh. I had so enjoyed in the previous book that she was naïve but not the usual impetuous YA heroine who refuses to listen to smart people or learn from her mistakes. Alas that is all gone now.
I also am increasingly uncomfortable with the author's internalized misogyny and obsession with rape. You'd think that this is a book that celebrates the power of women but it's on the surface. The author/book constantly rapes and brutalizes the female characters, and makes them insecure and fragile and obsessed with their appearance or babies to the detriment of their ability to function or think clearly. The competent, reasonable people are all men with the exception of a young girl (who was sexually and emotionally abused by her father) and that girl's mother (who is mostly reduced to role of tired nursemaid in this book instead of the fascinating prickly brave woman she was written as in the first book). And Lily. Lily is horrifically abused and yet she decides to do something incredibly brave and turns out to be extremely smart and skilled.
I also really disliked Kelsea's non-consensual having sex with Penn. Ugh. She's his Queen and his direct employee/servant as close guard. The power dynamic is absolutely not at all allowing him to have a real choice in the matter despite her "I'm not Queen now" whispers. The whole thing was really distasteful to me. And I was already not really happy about where they went with Penn even before they started having sex. All of a sudden he's in love with her and has to go visit a prostitute or someone to get jacked off regularly so he can be around the person he loves without being aroused all the time I guess? Wow, okay. That's... something. He's not a teenager, does he have no bodily control? I was hoping that the real reason he'd refused her was that he was gay. They even talked about it right after he refuses her the first time and it would have been a really nice way for that situation to be negotiated. And Mace should have pulled him off of close guard duty right away. He says that it's something that happens a lot with close guards. That totally makes sense. But it also can't possibly have been a situation where it turns out well often enough that he'd tolerate it. It seems like such a security weakness.
I'm uncomfortable with the inclusion of self-harm as a way for Kelsea to deal with things. That is a very real issue and Kelsea is hiding it and forcing the only person who knows (Penn) to not talk about it (gee, doesn't that tell her anything about how much he can't consent to sex with her even if he is in love with her?). It is modeling a very troubling coping mechanism in a way that makes it seem acceptable, and I worry about that. The book/author makes it clear that drugging yourself against the pain of an abusive husband and shitty oppressive world is not acceptable so I know this book/author can let readers know when something is not a healthy coping strategy.
The whole magic/sapphires/suddenly Kelsea can do anything she needs to do to solve the plot problem at the time (deus ex... sapphires?) was annoying. Kelsea never needed to compromise or listen to her advisors or learn from her mistakes because she could simply heal the dying or blow up bridges or escape into a convenient vision or telepathically violate people and learn their deepest secrets or paralyze people or ... sigh. I didn't hate it because I'm hoping there's a good reason it works like that, but it feels like really lazy writing in this book.
I did really like learning more about the Crossing and finally getting payoff for all the "modern world" hints that were sprinkled throughout the first book. I didn't find the switch to the "modern America" jarring or unexpected, it was fun, and with Kelsea being so intolerable, I honestly enjoyed those sections more, even with Lily being so brutalized.
I'm reading the third one but only for Lily. And Aisa, my ferocious stabby girl.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse and Rape
Moderate: Murder and War
Minor: Child abuse
cmbohn's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse
Moderate: Child abuse, Rape, Self harm, Fire/Fire injury, and War
kalmia31's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
emotional
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gore, Hate crime, Homophobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, Violence, Blood, Trafficking, Religious bigotry, Murder, Sexual harassment, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Addiction, Child abuse, Infertility, Pedophilia, Slavery, Kidnapping, Abortion, Fire/Fire injury, and Gaslighting