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adventurous
mysterious
reflective
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
0.5
Overall, just bad. I've read many self-published works better. The writing is just childish and awkward. The idea isn't terrible (that's what got the half star), but the execution is severely lacking. I lost count of formatting and grammar errors, which made the immersion even more difficult. The ending felt like a copout and didn't leave me satisfied.
Content Warnings
Minor: Homophobia and Transphobia
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