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These Twisted Bonds by Lexi Ryan

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pengu7's review against another edition

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adventurous hopeful mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

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rinku's review against another edition

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adventurous slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.0

We only have January and with These Twisted Bonds, I already have my first one star read. This book is just terrible: The writing is so bad, there’s barely any plot, and the men just make me uncomfortable. I don’t want to be mean, but it’s so obvious that the author only has written romance/erotica before.

Brie has turned into a faerie and is still caught in a love triangle – that is basically everything that happened, besides fighting some random Mustache-twirling villains. It was quite hard to follow because the events from the first book are barely mentioned, and there are not many explanations what’s happening. If I’m honest, this novel is really not a fantasy novel. The fantasy elements are hardly there, and the ones that are make no sense at all or are just not creative. I always hate it when we have random serums in fantasy stories that can just stop the magic. The setting also doesn’t feel authentic. It’s supposed to be your classical medieval inspired fantasy medieval setting, but have coffee, showers, needles, and words like “badass” are used.

For 300 pages, they just talk, and nothing else happens. Brie is in general such a passive character. There’s one moment where she eavesdrops on some conversation but doesn’t react to anything for two pages, so we just get the dialogue. We then maybe have 150 pages of plot total but there’s not deeper story that is told but just some stereotypical and predictable fantasy plot points. It’s just so uncreative how Brie, of course, gets randomly kidnapped, how she’s

of course the true queen, how there’s a new special kind of bond, and that her sister gets kidnapped again. Brie then kills Arya just like this

. In the end, the status quo doesn’t change at all which was just frustrating.

For These Hollow Vows, I read the German translation but this time, I read the original Englisch version, and it’s just so bad. There’s so much “hard swallowing” and “head crocking”; Brie literally swallows hard on every page, and even two times on one page. Brie mentions additionally a lot that no one will manipulate her again for like hundred times. I was also barely able to imagine anything because we have a lot of instances of the white room syndrome. I find this whole male and female stuff also so cringy, and I don’t even know what “a lesser male” is supposed to be.

Brie is still an annoying character who’s not like other girls. I also hate how the plot assigns her random abilities when the plot needs her to have them, like her suddenly being a really good lip reader. While her sister was her biggest motivation in the first book, she just doesn’t care for her in this novel. What she does care for are the men that are all unlikable characters as well. We get a third prince with Misha which is even more annoying. It’s so uncomfortable how he flirts with Brie by objectifying. Bash is still the Tamlin while Finn treats her also like an object he can own – even though he’s supposed to be the right guy, the good old “holding guys doing the same thing to different standards because one of them is the love interest”. Finn and Brie are just cringe, and their relationship is cliché, like they have to pretend to be a couple and have only one bed.

Talking about relationships: We of course need a random female rival that sits on peoples’ lap without a reason? Who would do that in real life lmao. It wasn’t a surprise that

she’s a traitor in the end

. The rest of the cast is barely worked out; we just don’t know anything about them. I still don’t get the family tree as well, it’s so confusing. The characters show as well that Ryan has a very basic understanding of good and evil. Good people like Brie save children while the bad people send children into the mines, the most cliché evil thing.

All in all, I wouldn’t recommend the These Hollow Vows< series. The first book was okay, but the second one was just so bad. Plot points are repeated and uncreative, the writing is bad, and the relationships are cringe.

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smuttymcbookface's review against another edition

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adventurous dark medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

I found this enjoyable to read, even if just to wrap up the story, but I did find myself overlooking some flaws despite my enjoyment.

Pros:

Interesting and easy to follow plot
A love triangle where the other man is not an unredeemable villain
Some sweet and tender moments mixed in
Any interactions with Misha, since he was hilarious

Cons

Too quickly and conveniently wrapped up
Both MMCs lost their character/individuality
There was too much cheesiness/corniness in some of the romantic scenes
The amount of fishing and reassurance required by Brie in the romance scenes were ridiculous - especially since she gave nothing back in comparison
The power and Fae abilities of the main characters (Brie, Misha, Finn) felt inconsistent and underdeveloped
The early dialog scenes were too long, particularly when contrasted with quick wrapped-up-in-a-bow ending
Much more minor than the other points, but I hated the use of "male" when Brie described the love interests - left me a little icky even though I know it was trying to diffentiate them as fae

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thelongroadtosanity's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.0

"There is only one thing I can trust, and that is that no one can be trusted."

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This book concludes the conflict between the Seelie and Unseelie courts. Abriella discovers that Bash has betrayed her, and flees the Sun Court, wandering the woods until she stumbles upon a work camp for Unseelie prisoners. Freeing those trapped there, and befriending the Wild Fae King, Bri has to overcome her emotions and discover the truth about herself and the power of the Unseelie Court.

The first book in this Duology has fan-fiction vibes, and that continues on into this story. Towards the end, I definitely felt there was some Throne of Glass overlap. I also struggled with Bri through the entirety of the plot. I felt that she was very, very whiney and annoying and continued to mope about and profess "woe is me, I've been betrayed". It's definitely like that for nearly half the book and I must admit, I would have DNF-ed this solely based on my agitation with Bri's character if I wasn't supposed to be doing a buddy read with coworkers.

The plot is fast-paced, which did keep my attention, and I enjoyed the action and bits of spice sprinkled throughout Bri's emotional breakdowns. The lore and world-building is more complicated in this, and I felt that it was almost too overwhelming at one point until it was all explained later on in the timeline. Once it all made sense, it peaked my interest.

I was not a fan of the conclusion. It felt like there was so much build-up to get to this point and then everything happened over what felt like 5 pages and then everything was suddenly fine and dandy again. The small plot twist at the end was a nice surprise, but I wanted more character development from Bash, Bri, and Finn. I suppose you could consider this a "slow-burn" type of romance with an awkward "love-triangle" troupe if you really wanted to.

Overall, I was slightly disappointed in this Duology. The hype behind the books was so great, especially for those who love SJM, ACOTAR, and TOG (aka ME) but unfortunately for me it just wasn't there. I definitely wanted more from the plot and more from the characters. (07/2023)

3 out of 5 stars

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kassidyreads's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.5

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haley49's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional hopeful inspiring slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No

4.5

Compared to the last book this one was super slow. I took week’s getting through that first third of it. It was a lot of build up; however, when it got going it was amazing. The world building, the character relationships, the plot was all so good and worked as an excellent sequel. The twists were even better than the last book!

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louisa_pennyfeather2021's review against another edition

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dark slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

1.0

I only read this book because Book 1's ending had me thinking there would be an epic female lead with an antivillain arc. I couldn't have been more wrong. To me, this felt like a Wattpad Y/N crossover fanfic of Mortal Instruments, ACOTAR, and The Vampire Diaries. This book almost mad me dislike reading again. I didn't enjoy the undertones perpetuated through the elements of goblins and slave camps. I couldn't figure out how Brie is supposed to be, but I'm hoping she was 18 because if she wasn't, certain scenes of this book shouldn't exist.

I hated both love interests, but the main character made me unreasonably angry. The entire time, it felt like watching The Vampire Diaries. Both Brie and Elena Gilbert had the constant narrative of "I don't want this power, but I want these two brothers and I don't want to choose." Maybe I just prefer sound decisions, but her constant back and forth and emotional manipulation of both love interests was infuriating.

The book was definitely romance heavy because certain aspects of violence and war weren't as detailed as the other Fantasy books I've read since first reading These Hollow Vows.

Overall, I did not enjoy this book. Both books made me so angry. I had high hopes for it as this duology was my first time reading Fantasy ever. Unfortunately, I was disappointed.

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