Reviews with content warning for Physical abuse - The Book of Azrael

This book has me at a literal FEELINGS crossroads as it took me 50% before I was into it. This wouldn't normally be a problem as it can be expected in some books there could be a need to build up the plot and characters before that hook drives itself completely in! The only problem is 50% of this book was OVER 400 PAGES!

The story follows the dual POV of Dianna and (Samkiel) Liam. Dianna is what the world thinks is a villain. One thousand years ago she sacrificed her life to save her dying sister Gaby. Dianna is turned into an Ig'Morruthen (evil monster basically) after making a deal with basically the Devil, Kaden. Kaden is awful and continuously threatens the safety of Gaby if Dianna doesn't do his atrocious bidding. Now Kaden is after the Book of Azrael and he has tasked Dianna with finding it.

The world-building in this super, it is really good for a debut novel and is pretty fleshed out and complex whilst still being easy to wrap your head around. There were unique aspects I had not seen done before and I have read quite a bit of fantasy recently. I was intrigued by the power system possessed by the Gods and Monsters. I loved how the different worlds were spun together and the history of the universe carried a weight that actually added to aspects that had brought our characters to this point in history. There were a few info dumps (often disguised as "blood dreams") but it didn't feel over-saturated with these, so they were manageable.

Dianna was an interesting character. She is morally grey and Amber Nicole does not shy away from aspects that would make her a villain in this story, but she doesn't fully encompass true darkness. Dianna has brutally killed and harmed people before and has anger issues very similar to the Hulk. She is also very badass, sassy and powerful but is not unbreakable. The one thing that makes her extremely likable though is she has not fully lost sight of her moral compass. She is only bad and evil because Kaden makes her so, but through actions is VERY self-sacrificing - (this almost becomes nauseatingly repetitive how often it happens though since IT HAPPENS A LOT IN THE BOOK).

Liam is emo, suffering pretty badly from PTSD and depression, and is very cold at the start. His POV does feel a little lacking and bland but these seem to evolve over time as he learns about the customs of the world and starts spending more and more time with Dianna. In the end he did change into a real wholesome person, and it is understandable why he is as broken and almost void of emotion at the start given everything he has gone through to earn his name World Ender.

I did like the Banter between the two, and the slow burn mortal enemies-to-lovers was done really well! This relationship took time to develop and didn't feel rushed or forced. There were things they each had to work through as both Dianna and Liam are a little bit broken but both ended up helping one another battle their internal demons. They really do encompass "stronger together than alone."

The one bad thing about this book however is its writing. It is very sloppy at times and could have really used another round of editing. There are typos and missing words. The spacing on the ebook also drove me INSANE at the start as everything was paragraphed with spacing, which made the flow of the book really difficult as I had to deal with unnecessary pauses the whole time. There were also words and terms thrown in that the reader was just expected to understand and know what they meant without a clear explanation. Often Action scenes or descriptions of places felt muddled and weren't fully clear what was going on so there were numerous times I had to reread sentences or go back a few lines to understand what was happening. I also felt a few plot holes slipped in and aspects were not always explained clearly. I am hoping these holes are plugged and explained in book two and not forgotten. I also started growing increasingly annoyed at the word iridescent, as this seems to be the only way colour was described. IT APPEARS 9 TIMES IN TOTAL PEOPLE!

The other aspect of the writing that bothered me was the characterization in general. This is meant to be a NEW ADULT. These characters are all WAY WAY over 1000 years old. BUT THEN why does it feel like every one of these characters is still a teenager? The characters' actions and behavior at times were extremely immature and childish and for beings who have lived as long as they have, this shouldn't be the case. This immaturity is mostly seen in Dianna, but it also slips in with the way Logan acts and Gaby speaks, and how Liam interprets situations.

Overall I did like the concept and if I miraculously knew the first 50% of the book and only rated this on the last half, then this would have been 5 Stars. Based on this I cannot wait for the second book to come out so that I can see where this story and the world go.

Overall I would recommend this book if you like the following:
▹Mortal Enemies to Lovers
▹Captor/Captive Romances (slightly)
▹Slow Burn
▹Only one bed
▹Morally Grey Characters

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