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booksthatburn's review
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
SERVANT MAGE has the density of an epic fantasy in a novella-sized package, told from the perspective of a character who would usually be incidental to this kind of story.
Fellian is an interesting and well-defined character, I like her a lot, and she's what got me through this book. She's a commoner chosen for a specific but not unique skill, being used by people with a particular political angle and strategic goal that has very little to do with her everyday life. Where this fell apart for me is that it tries to fit a novel and a half of worldbuilding into a novella, gradually turning into a confusing blur of names and motivations that left me unsure of the point until the very end. In the final third of the book, Fellian is still asking questions about who people are and why things matter, and at one point is rebuked for doing so. It’s especially frustrating because this means the author knows it’s unclear, teases with the possibility of an answer and then declines to offer it when it would be most useful.
Even though there were a lot of details, most of them weren't useful in terms of understanding the secondary characters and their motivations. They seemed to fit character archetypes pretty generically and I kept mixing up who was who.
I think it's supposed to be a slow burn reveal that actuallyboth sides of this conflict suck and the Monarchists aren't as great as they seemed at first, but since the very first thing they do is kidnap Fellian and enlist her help under false pretenses which rob her of any meaningful agency for long stretches, I didn't spend any time thinking they were good. It ends up being a struggle between the group that will straight up murder a baby and the group that thinks it's fine to just cut one a little bit if it's for the greater good. By the end, it was impossible to think of either side as good, which is definitely the point of the book, but it felt like 20% kidnapping, 40% adventure, 35% confusing piles of unnecessary detail, with the final 5% as a manifesto about ordinary people making a difference for themselves while the bigger powers tear each other apart.
Fellian is an interesting and well-defined character, I like her a lot, and she's what got me through this book. She's a commoner chosen for a specific but not unique skill, being used by people with a particular political angle and strategic goal that has very little to do with her everyday life. Where this fell apart for me is that it tries to fit a novel and a half of worldbuilding into a novella, gradually turning into a confusing blur of names and motivations that left me unsure of the point until the very end. In the final third of the book, Fellian is still asking questions about who people are and why things matter, and at one point is rebuked for doing so. It’s especially frustrating because this means the author knows it’s unclear, teases with the possibility of an answer and then declines to offer it when it would be most useful.
Even though there were a lot of details, most of them weren't useful in terms of understanding the secondary characters and their motivations. They seemed to fit character archetypes pretty generically and I kept mixing up who was who.
I think it's supposed to be a slow burn reveal that actually
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child death, Death, Blood, and Classism
Moderate: Body horror, Child abuse, Terminal illness, Violence, Excrement, Grief, and Fire/Fire injury
Minor: Confinement, Slavery, Forced institutionalization, Death of parent, and Sexual harassment
laurareads87's review
adventurous
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
Servant Mage follows Fellian, a fire mage, who, through the course of the story, goes from indentured servitude to revolutionary and adventurer all while finding her way home to the town she was taken from as a child. In this world, dominated by the 'Liberationists' who are anything but liberatory, mages are identified early and forced into servitude or worse. Liberationists associate magic with lack of virtue and so those with magic are punished; opposed to the Liberationists are the Monarchists, seeking to re-establish a magical lineage of rulers and create a world that would not oppress mages in this way but would certainly be rigidly hierarchical in class structure. Fellian, understandably, hates the Liberationists, but falling in with Monarchists was never part of her plan and when it happens, she has some difficult choices to navigate.
What I liked most about this book was the world-building. Despite the novella's short size this feels like a fully fleshed out world complete with social, political, and magical systems that make sense. The plot moved along at a good quick pace and the action scenes were well described and exciting. What didn't work for me here was character development. Aside from Fellian, all of the characters felt undeveloped -- little really distinguished them from each other even when some of their back stories were revealed. The supporting characters felt more as though they were there simply to serve a narrative function for Fellian than to be interesting in their own right; some of this, I think, is a function of the book being so short. As for Fellian, I found her... whiny? I don't need to love a protagonist by any means, and am entirely fine with a book where no characters at all are straightforwardly likeable, but I somehow found Fellian very irritating to follow.
What I liked most about this book was the world-building. Despite the novella's short size this feels like a fully fleshed out world complete with social, political, and magical systems that make sense. The plot moved along at a good quick pace and the action scenes were well described and exciting. What didn't work for me here was character development. Aside from Fellian, all of the characters felt undeveloped -- little really distinguished them from each other even when some of their back stories were revealed. The supporting characters felt more as though they were there simply to serve a narrative function for Fellian than to be interesting in their own right; some of this, I think, is a function of the book being so short. As for Fellian, I found her... whiny? I don't need to love a protagonist by any means, and am entirely fine with a book where no characters at all are straightforwardly likeable, but I somehow found Fellian very irritating to follow.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Slavery, Forced institutionalization, and War
Moderate: Blood and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Child abuse and Sexual harassment