The design and UX isn't done, Rob and Abbie, okkurrrr! đ
minimicropup's review against another edition
challenging
dark
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
The writing is extremely âtell-not-showâ. It was hard to get an idea of the surroundings because they werenât descriptive or immersive. It was visual and very basic like the red room, the waiting area with high humidity, the island, the dock, the jungle... The main character moves all over a yacht, for example, but no scene is set other than it being luxurious, rich, near a pool and so on. The dialogue doesnât naturally flow, itâs disconnected and flat. Almost like âoh no, ___ Is dead, what is happening?â People standing by like âOh no, you shouldnât do ___ (some dangerous thing)â, but not doing anythingâŚno sense of panic, just being told the characters are scared or confused. I donât mind books where I have to rely primarily on my imagination, but itâs an art form to write that style and keep that freedom for the reader to maintain the world they are creating with guidance from the author, and this author did not achieve that at all. When having to rely primarily on our imaginations for every setting it becomes frustrating to find halfway through the book that we imagined something so incorrectly. Far too often I found myself wondering where a character even was! Very close to being a DNF.
Graphic: Murder and Suicide
Moderate: Racism, Racial slurs, and Bullying
Minor: Terminal illness and Vomit
maritay918's review against another edition
dark
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Not one likable character. Interesting twist at the end. Original is better.Â
Graphic: Terminal illness, Bullying, and Alcoholism
Moderate: Panic attacks/disorders, Vomit, Violence, Toxic friendship, and Drug use
Minor: Suicide, Police brutality, Racism, and Antisemitism
amandas_bookshelf's review against another edition
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Graphic: Animal death, Antisemitism, Bullying, Alcohol, Cancer, Confinement, Death, Drug use, Eating disorder, Gaslighting, Hate crime, Murder, Suicide, and Terminal illness
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