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The Black Veins by Ashia Monet

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lono00's review

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adventurous emotional mysterious medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.25

stiino19's review against another edition

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adventurous fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

I really liked it

jessicafavor's review

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4.0

In some ways I’m surprised that this is a debut novel, because the characters are so well-crafted and I loved all of their dynamics with one another, but in other ways I can understand how this is the first book Monet has written; in the first couple of chapters, the style feels a bit stiff and formal, but the further you go into the book the more it relaxes. It feels like Monet finds a more natural “voice” about 1/4th of the way through, and from there everything is smooth sailing.

But the characters! The characters. The blurb describes this book as “the no-love-interest, found family adventure you’ve been searching for” which is a bold claim but ended up being entirely correct. I hadn’t thought I’d been searching for that exact thing, but Monet proved me wrong. All of the Guardians are so vibrant and quirky, and so inclusive — Blythe is Black and bisexual, Caspian is trans, Daniel has an anxiety disorder, Antonio is Latino, and the list just goes on. Their “babysitter,” a young woman named Katia, is grouchy and rude and participates in a kidnapping over breakfast, but is still likeable because yeah, she’s a bitch, but she isn’t a bigot. (My favorite character was definitely Cordelia, but this is supposed to be a serious book review as opposed to just me gushing about a new favorite read).

All of the Guardians have a great, complex dynamic with one another that changes over time. They aren’t instantly best friends, nor do they even instantly get along, and they keep secrets, make bargains, and occasionally even lie to each other. Ultimately, however, they are definitely a found family, and they keep each other going through even the darkest trials. It’s very wholesome, but it’s wholesomeness with so much tension because the stakes are so high. All of the Guardians are minors, but the danger they were facing felt so real and I was genuinely scared for them.

One of those dangers is the Erasers, who “erase” magic-users out of existence if they reveal the secret of magic existing to non-magical people. The Erasers have been pursuing Blythe and her family for as long as she can remember, and it’s a big mystery as to why they’re doing so until the very end of the book. My opinion is that the mystery of the Erasers was drawn out for too long, because their terrifying mystique had become hokey and annoying by the time everything was explained about their motives for what they did. Nevertheless, I’m really intrigued by them, and I’m really curious about what role the Erasers will play in the next installment of this series.

mobelchhh's review against another edition

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4.0

Such a fun book--pure adventure from beginning to end! The amount of typos was really distracting at certain points of the reading experience, but I truly enjoyed myself. Couldn't put it down. I'm definitely excited to see all these characters come back in the sequel.