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Heart of Mist by Helen Scheuerer

booksarebetter's review against another edition

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4.0

Review to come! I really liked this but ugh that cliffhanger!!!!

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4.0

I have such mixed feelings about this book. On the one hand, finally! A fantasy book with a young female lead protagonist that isn't just a flimsy veneer for a romance. The world building was excellent and not only were there other significant characters besides the heroine, but every side character was fully fleshed out with their own problems and flaws. AND, as a plus, the book was gritty and dark, none of the fluffiness omnipresent in the YA lit I usually read.

**Note, some spoilers below, besides the ones in the spoiler tags.**

However, I didn't like a large percentage of the characters, they drove me up the wall.

Swinton in particular, realllllly got on my nerves. Normally, in these types of books, he would be one of my favorites, but in this case Scheuerer did a great (if unintentional) job of making him despicable to me. I guessed what drove his actions as soon as she dropped the hints
Spoilerhis thought about how a previous relationship with a lower born woman hadn't ended well, his money mysteriously vanishing for parts unknown and being unable to afford to upkeep his gear)
, however I also just assumed that the King knew all along and was blackmailing him, which would in some small measure excuse his blind loyalty. However, at the end, it was revealed that he'd thought the king was ignorant of his secret. And thinking back on all his actions, and how he'd probably condemned hundreds, maybe thousands to death with the mist-and-map scheme and had rounded up hundreds of Ashai for torture and death, I just can't excuse him for his behavior. Can't. He shows incredible selfishness throughout
Spoilerone of many examples is his relative indifference to the fact that one of his men is trying to rape(!) Bleak while she is under his care (da fuk, dude)
, and his selfishness is compounded by also displaying an incredible capacity for self-righteousness
Spoilerhe doesn't take any sort of responsibility or blame in his own mind for the fiasco at the tavern where Bleak was forced to defend herself and Henri by killing everyone since he'd essentially slipped Henri a date rape drug and she couldn't defend herself
, and an incredible capacity for self-pity, along with all his other disgusting qualities. I understand that Scheuerer was trying to make him a flawed, yet sympathetic character, but in my eyes she went way overboard and ruined him, probably beyond redemption. (Depends on whether he improves in the sequels and whether I forget all my rage and frustration in this installment, lol.)

As for the other characters, let's see.

I hated Bren. He was pathetic, entitled
Spoilerhe thought he had some sort of claim on Bleak because of his attachment
, annoying
Spoilerwhy oh whyyy did he have to follow her everywhere??
, not to mention stupid
Spoilerallow me to point you to the part where he shows up at the palace claiming to be one of a race of people who are persecuted, imprisoned, and murdered because he thinks that that will get people to take him to Bleak???
.

I also wasn't a huge fan of Henri a lot of the time. She got better towards the end, but for a large chunk of the middle was a pretty unlikable chick, even after making allowances for her position and the weight of her responsibilities.

Dash got on my nerves because I thought, given his age, he should have been much more aware of the social/political consequences of his actions. I hate when authors forget that kids are actually pretty smart.

Fiore was alrightish, not too annoying, which is saying something with this lot, but also not great.

And then there was Bleak herself. Probably the main reason I kept reading (along with the fact that this book is goddamn addicting, so much Drama), and even she had her moments. Usually because I was cursing her for not even attempting to overcome her addiction.

Sidenote, Luka was great, and I really enjoyed Bleak's forays into her thoughts. Also, Athene was harsh.

Alas, despite all the numerous shortcomings of the characters and how much they all had me pulling out my hair, they were, for the most part, incredibly real and drawn with considerable thought. The plot also had a level of complexity and intrigue that I haven't encountered in a good long while, so win for that. I did manage to guess/predict a chunk of the twists, but that didn't diminish the reading experience except when I was hopping up and down cursing the characters for not figuring things out sooner.

To summarize (and repeat), I have very mixed feelings about this book. Was it great? Infuriating? Brilliant? Dissatisfying?

Probably all of the above?

Oh, and let's not forget the cliffhanger. No neat resolutions for this book, oh no. Will have to read the sequel, which I think isn't going to be released until sometime mid-2018, urg.

One last thought:
SpoilerI can't help but be impressed at the degree of dislike that Swinton leveled at Dash during their encounters.


Listening Soundtrack:
- Purity of Heart - Steve Jablonsky (this! perfectly captures the tone of the book)
- Songs from Wonder Woman (No Man's Land, Pain, Loss & Love, etc)- Rupert Gregson-Williams
- Radiate - Joseph Trapanese
- other...

gemhall's review against another edition

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3.0

Not in the right headspace to enjoy this book. Had trouble picking it back up but also trouble putting it down.

belle2022's review against another edition

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5.0

There’s so much attention to detail and I couldn’t help but really enjoy the way this was written. All the different characters are connected and I’m really intrigued by Dash and Olenna and how they’re stories come in to it.

Bleak has me completely intrigued and her character was one that had to grow on me. I found her annoying and very dismissive of everything but she really started to come into her own and her power. The entire thing on the ship to Moredon Tower always rubbed me wrong and I knew something was going to happen.

Swinton is another character I wasn’t expecting to like that mug but towards the end he has a lot more elements to him than I expected. I enjoyed it and will be reading the second one soon, because that sneak peek was just too good to pass down.

kimnoooone's review against another edition

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adventurous slow-paced

2.5

ashley_apairofreaders's review against another edition

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5.0

4.5/5

This is a YA epic fantasy at its finest. Helen Scheuerer does an amazing job of presenting these flawed characters who are swept up in a much larger plot. She does a really good job of showing those characters grow from the beginning of the book until the end.

I love the way the plot builds and that the multiple POVs give you small pieces of each of the characters' stories, pieces of their past, and pieces of what the future might hold. It keeps you hooked as the plot plays out.

Overall, one of my favorite reads of 2023!

nyxesss's review against another edition

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3.0

Characters 7
writing 8
plot 8
entertainment 4
6.8★

elyseparis's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

graceb_b's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

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4.0

Have to know what happens next!!!

Full review to come soon.

*EDITED*

I received this copy in exchange for an honest review from the author. All thoughts and opinions are my own. Thank you Helen!

HI I AM IN LOVE. This was the perfect start to this trilogy, and I’m writing this review after finishing all three books so that may colour it a bit.

The series follows four main character POVs – Bleak, the first, is a drunken teenager who is arrested for reasons she does not understand at first, and that sparks of the rest of the story; Henri, a warrior woman who has so many layers that we see unfold over the course of the story; Commander Swinton, the antagonist in this first book, the one who arrests Bleak, and who has secrets of his own; and finally Dash, a ten-year-old stableboy living near the palace who is friends with the princess. Bleak is the most prominent in this novel, we start and end with her POV, and her story intersects with Henri’s and Swinton’s. We do not see Dash much, but there is a set up for more in his POV that made me intrigued.

While the story moves pretty fast, this novel is a lot of set up. The world is built, not in info-dumping, but with the unveiling of secrets upon secrets, and the characters learning things – not just in their lives, but in the entire world – are not as they seem.

I don’t want to give any spoilers, because honestly, this is such a good set up for the rest of the series. It’s written in such a way that you get sucked into the world and it is almost jarring to leave it. A mark of a good read is one that makes you want to immediately pick the next book up, and Heart Of Mist does exactly that.