hopecobblepotworld's review
3.0
Nice distraction
I really enjoyed this story and it did capture my full attention. However, there were quite a few mistakes that did not get properly edited such as two different names being used for the same character (Dawson). Fix those and it gets another star.
I really enjoyed this story and it did capture my full attention. However, there were quite a few mistakes that did not get properly edited such as two different names being used for the same character (Dawson). Fix those and it gets another star.
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