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ashleyjean14's review
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
5.0
jamiesmithyyy's review
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
I loved this one oh my days it was so good. i would probably reread it in the future to be honest.
magui13's review
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.0
kells_'s review
2.0
In the beginning of this book I was interested and the plot def had my attention. What went wrong?
Positives:
1) Dominant woman, less experienced man! It was nice seeing this in a smutty book for a change when usually the man is more dominant and the guy is alm alw rlly experienced. I LOVE when a woman is dominant and the man is at her mercy.
2) He was completely worshipping her. Periodddd that's how every woman shld b treated in bed !!
Dislikes:
1) The writing was lackluster. Honestly, a lot of it made me cringe. There was so much repetitiveness and unnecessary additional rambling. I also caught multiple typos. For a published book, I would have expected better.
2) Jace was too much of a loser. I saw a review that said they loved desperate pathetic virgin loser mmcs. See, I like that refreshing change and idea of the lady being the one in charge too. However, Jace was wayyy too much of a loser for me. His inner monologue of constant i'm not good enough for her blah blah got sooo frustrating like ok bro i get it... grow a backbone
Positives:
1) Dominant woman, less experienced man! It was nice seeing this in a smutty book for a change when usually the man is more dominant and the guy is alm alw rlly experienced. I LOVE when a woman is dominant and the man is at her mercy.
2) He was completely worshipping her. Periodddd that's how every woman shld b treated in bed !!
Dislikes:
1) The writing was lackluster. Honestly, a lot of it made me cringe. There was so much repetitiveness and unnecessary additional rambling. I also caught multiple typos. For a published book, I would have expected better.
2) Jace was too much of a loser. I saw a review that said they loved desperate pathetic virgin loser mmcs. See, I like that refreshing change and idea of the lady being the one in charge too. However, Jace was wayyy too much of a loser for me. His inner monologue of constant i'm not good enough for her blah blah got sooo frustrating like ok bro i get it... grow a backbone
psychoevilchickz's review
adventurous
emotional
funny
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Tons of use of the eff word 😂 Loved this quick, smutty read though! Cute little sexy love story, I would have read more if it was longer! Definitely a perfect read for someone looking to dive right into some sexy fun!