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Jack by Layla Fae

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haithar's review

funny fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character

3.0

Get yourself a pining pumpkin demon who makes his own lube and springs king size beds with a click of a finger. What a dreamboat.

noriboo's review

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4.0

I'll never look at my bottle of pumpkin spice syrup as I did before reading this. It's utterly ridiculous, but it made me laugh, and that was what I was after.

evie_24's review

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fast-paced

2.5

bambi14's review

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adventurous mysterious fast-paced

Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

Jack: Halloween Monster Erotica, part of the Monster Ever After Series by Layla Fae, is a spicy(in more than one way…wink, wink) seasonal short story. Suzy is feeling lonely on Halloween, long since giving up hope for a family like all her friends. After eerily getting the same reading from her tarot cards, a book of love spells falls to the ground open. She figures, why not? Suzy decides to perform the spell. She did not expect the demon with an exquisite male body, topped with a fiery jack-o'lantern, to appear. Suzy definitely wasn't ready for the insane night that followed.

This is a super spicy piece of monster erotica. I loved the characters. Suzy has rolls and stretch marks and is a bit insecure and totally relatable. Jack is a demon, and he is enthralled with Suzy. Being a demon, he's got some differences in his extra appendage, and dang it; he tastes just like he looks..a pumpkin with some extra spice! Not only is the story smokin' hot, but super sweet as well.

I recommend this story for adults only…it's an erotic story; do I need to say more? If you enjoy steamy monster love stories with unusual appendages and super sweet fluids, you will LOVE Jack. I rate this story 5 out of 5 stars.