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Off to the Races by Elsie Silver

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emwebz's review against another edition

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lighthearted slow-paced

Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No

2.75

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emotional funny lighthearted medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

I wanted to read this book because I’m enjoying the Chestnut Series and the Rose Hill series so when I saw the new covers getting announced, I was so excited to start it. I loved seeing where Elsie Silver started.

This book has two points of view. The first one is Billie Black, and she is a talented horse trainer who has travelled all over the world in the most prestigious places, but when a good friend and father figure Hank, calls in a favour to come and work on a small-town ranch called Gold Rush Ranch in Ruby Creek. She makes the trip, but the second she lands, she is dealing with the arrogant Vaughn Harding who think Billie is there on his mother request for a date. They but heads and Vaughn gives Billie a deal, she has three months to make his most difficult horse into a race winner. The second point of view is Vaughn Harding, and he has taken a leave of absence from his job to get things sorted out his grandad’s ranch especially after his grandad is getting bad press about fixing major races. He is determined to keep things professional with all of his employees, but he can’t stop thinking about Billie. She's mouthy and so damn tempting. They clash from the moment they met. And in a small town, on an even smaller farm, it’s hard to keep your distance. It's even harder to keep the friction from turning to fire. But keeping his distance? That might be the biggest struggle of all. Because Billie is the whole package. They both drive each other crazy. Every smart-mouthed little comment, every game they play, they both want more. Suddenly Vaughn doesn’t care about winning race, he wants to win the girl.

I love that Elsie has a way of writing these found family, small town vibes. Like everyone instantly loved Billie where Vaughn was wanting her out of his hair as soon as possible. I loved that the girl group was formed, and they were all looking out for each other but also if they didn’t want to talk about the men in their life being a pain in the ass, they would just get drunk instead. I loved Billie instantly, how she was standing up for herself from day one and didn’t give a shit about her past she just wanted to make sure she proved herself. My favourite chapter was actually when Billie wacked the hell out of the jockey that hurt her horse after she specially told him not to hurt the horse and then screamed at Vaughn’s brother. I adored Hank, he reminds me of Harvey and how he loves the lads he adopted like Vaughn but Vaughn hurt his adopted daughter, so he is like I adore you, but I'm pissed off at you right now and told him some hard truths.

Vaughn was a walking red flag, he took a while to grow on me, he sorts of reminded me of Rhett. Cold, then warm, then cold again. Can't speak his mind. Then makes promises he can’t keep and then a man has to tell him that he fucked up. Like dude, could you not tell by the fact that Billie broke up with you, handed in her notice and was planning to leave the country towards the end of the book. Vaughn had his major character development within the last three chapters when the third act conflict happened, which I don’t believe was needed.

I love how Elsie has already introduced most of the characters from the ranch and the Harding family and this book was a solid first book in the series and I cannot wait to see what happens within the Gold Rush Ranch.

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emotional funny fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

The story provides what the blurb promises: a romance that is heavy on lust. Any other plot is secondary to that, even though the bond between the FMC and the horse she trains gets a lot of focus as well. The romance is quite entertaining, but nothing special. (I must add, though, that I managed to get through this book easily even though it feels like I'm in a reading slump atm.)

The romance is built on insta lust based on looks, but acting on that takes some time. Some of the smut scenes made me cringe with

how they emphasized possessiveness by talking about how by day the FMC works for the MC and by night she works under him or that she belongs to him.

That made my skin crawl in a very creepy way. I guess possessive dirty talk is – if not a red flag – a heavy turnoff for me. This is not the first time I've struggled with this concept in a romance plot.

I wish the other plot aspects of the romance were stronger, but even the biggest relationship conflict of

lost trust is resolved somewhat easily with a grand gesture provided by money

. The plot might aim for deep background of the MCs being wronged by their close family, but the book as a whole still feels a little too shallow.

I might continue to the sequel at some point; maybe Violet or Mira will have more substancial romances, if they get their turn in the sequels.

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