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Hawkwing's Journey by Erin Hunter

geo_curler's review against another edition

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5.0

Wow! Reading this book a second time just reminded me how well the author’s utilized Hawkwing’s perspective. Throughout the entire Warriors Universe, he is still one of the most realistic characters out there, and the authors did a great job of developing his character, especially after the loss of Pebbleshine.

chamomiledaydreams's review against another edition

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3.0

I think that Hawkwing is a good character choice for a special edition, because he plays an important role in the main series, but we don't get to see too much of him. He wasn't a POV character, but he was closely connected to two (Twigpaw and Violetpaw), and learning about his childhood fills in some interesting gaps in the timeline.

However, anyone familiar with the main series will know the basic plot points, which can make this super edition a somewhat frustrating and tedious read. We know that Darktail is a bad person, so it can be hard to read the first half of this novel, where the cats of SkyClan have yet to make up their mind how they feel about it. It often leads to contrived scenarios, where the authors must explain why anyone trusted him in the first place. The question is not, "What would these characters do in this situation?" but "How can we get the characters to behave in the way our story demands?" This is a valid approach to story-writing, but from personal experience, I know that it can be difficult on writers and maybe not the best choice for crafting a believable narrative or relatable characters.

The pacing and overall narrative arc of this super edition leaves me feeling conflicted. On the one hand, I didn't feel like any scenes or time periods dragged on for too long, and I liked how Pebbleshine and Hawkwing started off as rivals (although I didn't fully understand their progression to mates). However, the ending was anti-climactic, since we know that SkyClan doesn't find a home until Twigpaw recovers them. I was curious to see if this book would end with her appearance, but as it did not, there was just an awkward, "Oh, well. Echosong is back, and we still have hope. SkyClan will never give up," which I didn't find very satisfying as a reader.

Still, as far as super editions go, this one wasn't half-bad. I read it in between the fourth and fifth books of the sixth series, which I thought worked very well, because it gave me additional context for a storyline I had already finished and helped me appreciate the new SkyClan characters. I would recommend other fans to read this super edition anytime after the third book of the sixth series, maybe even a little earlier than I did, because it would add a personal investment to Violetpaw's journey to the gorge with her father.

maloniponi's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional hopeful inspiring reflective sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

wow! I really enjoyed this book! I was nervous after Bramblestar’s Storm but Hawkwing really blew it out of the park! I loved Hawkwings development, his rage, his guilt, his anger, his depression. He went through so much this book; as did ALL of SkyClan. I really appreciated the book delving into the more emotional side of the cats and allowing Hawkwing to FEEL things without being seen as “not warrior-like” Really good book!

elizabetholsson's review against another edition

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3.0

→ 3 stars (★★★)

leonajasmin's review against another edition

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4.0

Hawkwing ended up being a really enjoyable character for me. While I wasn't particularly invested in SkyClan in its previous renditions, his strong character made me far more invested in them. He dynamic with other characters, especially Sharpclaw, Pebbleshine, and Leafstar, made him one of the most developed characters in a Warriors book for some time.
While I found the ending rushed and ending at a point where I didn't expect, the plot was progressing at a good speed. The rise and fall of hope was written really well, and this book felt very emulative of the Original Arc in terms of emotion and being willing to dispose of characters not needed.

sophieday's review against another edition

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3.0

This is just a theory but are Hawkwings kits Twigpaw and Violetpaw?

ember14's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? N/A
  • Loveable characters? Yes

4.0

enter_the_phantom's review against another edition

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3.0

I usually enjoy the Super Editions, but I just didn’t see why we needed this one.

I really expected this to focus more on Darktail and give us a good concrete tie-in to his Vision of Shadows plot. He was such a terrifying and formidable enemy in the Vision of Shadows arc—he very nearly manages to do what so many villains before him have tried and failed at, and he deserved much more than a few chapters worth of backstory in this book. It was so weird to see one of the first genuinely frightening villains we’ve had in a long time reduced to a second-rate baddie here.

Most of the book just follows Skyclan as they wander in circles, something we’ve seen plenty of in previous books, and I’m just tired of it now. With all the implied tragedy in Vision of Shadows, more needed to actually happen to Skyclan than a bird attack and some badgers.

Hawkwing is not an interesting or important enough character to deserve his own Super Edition. Not a lot happens to him, and it’s just boring.

Would have made a much better novella. Honestly kind of dumb that Mapleshade only got a novella and a very ill-developed secondary Skyclan cat gets a whole Super Edition, but oh well.

thesapphiccelticbookworm's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.75


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cassidylynnereads's review against another edition

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3.0

If I gave out half stars in my ratings, this book would definitely be a 3.5 out of 5 stars, but my personal philosophy is that I don't round up unless I think a book really deserves that extra star rating. That being said, I really enjoyed this book, and there were times when I couldn't put it down even though I was tired. The only reason this didn't get a four star rating is because I'm super picky and there were just a few things holding it back. Despite these few things that I picked out, this was one of my favorite super editions besides Mothwing's Vision. I didn't have any strong opinions about SkyClan or it's cats before reading this book, but now I just want to see them get a happy ending. With my initial thoughts out of the way, I will now be getting into the specifics of what I liked and disliked about this book.

Spoiler I didn't necessarily take stars off for this, but one thing that bothered me was how much the book tried to be descriptive, but just ended up sounding odd. I guess maybe the Erins are trying to describe the characters' emotions in a new way, but the whole way through the book I couldn't help but wonder whether Hawkwing had a stomach problem or not because every time he felt some strong emotion he mentioned his stomach clenching or churning. If they had mixed in this new expression of emotion with the old forms then it probably would have worked better, but as it is now Hawkwing is just mentioning his stomach every few paragraphs. One thing that did contribute to a star being taken off was the way that time changed. This is a part where the authors could work on showing rather than telling. I understand that there have to be time shifts in order to skip to the interesting parts of the Clan's travels, but instead of saying "x amount of moons passed since y happened" I think they could have included subtle hints about the passage of time. This wouldn't have bothered me if it happened once or twice, but once SkyClan really got moving it happened so frequently it became annoying. Those were really the major reasons that I gave this book three stars instead of four. One other thing that is just me being picky is that I wish I had gone into this book not knowing that Darktail is a villain. I know that this isn't any fault of the authors since this is how the story had to be released to make the most sense, but I could easily see Darktail's motives for seemingly innocent things that he did, and I wasn't nearly as surprised at Hawkwing when he finally turned on the Clan. Again, this isn't the fault of the authors, but it's just something I wish could have worked out differently, so I didn't let this contribute to my rating in any way. I can't go into everything I liked about this book, but I will mention some things. I liked having more development for SkyClan characters that I'd seen before, but not in any great depth. I got more connected to the newer members and found myself loving the senior warriors even more. I thought all of the losses were well spaced out and were heartbreaking. It hurt to see so many cats that I loved die or go missing, especially when some felt unnecessary or forced, but I also know that SkyClan's struggle was part of their destiny as a Clan. I also thought it was interesting to see the depth of the relationships between SkyClan cats, and the raw power of their grief compared to the other Clan cats who are used to losing their loved ones in battle. I will say though that the main romance between Hawkwing and Pebbleshine felt entirely superficial and forced (after all they switched from hating each other to loving each other super quickly with not much reason besides Hawkwing saving Pebbleshine and Hawkwing thinking that Pebbleshine is pretty) and I was honestly rooting more for a Hawkwing and Plumwillow romance near the end of the book. The rest of the relationships were endearing though, especially Leafstar and Billystorm and my favorite, Cherrytail and Sharpclaw. I also wasn't very fond of Hawkwing in the beginning. His attitude was so unwarranted and his actions were just plain foolish most of the time. I see he gets his temper from his father, but even Sharpclaw got annoyed by it in the beginning. By the end of the book I grew to like him a bit more, especially as he took on the role of adoptive father and deputy, but he still isn't a favorite of mine. I feel even worse for Hawkwing seeing all the fans who think Violetpaw and Twigpaw are his kits because that means Pebbleshine most likely didn't make it. That being said, I really hope SkyClan gets a happy ending.