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booksthatburn's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
THE THIRTEENTH HOUR is an intricate and emotional gaslamp fantasy of apostasy in a world where every mortal was created by a specific god in their own image, and everything is a sin to someone.
The worldbuilding is complex and detailed, with twelve domains plus a hub world (Chime), special characteristics and abilities for the various kinds of mortals, and gods with their own agendas, mores, and conflicting definitions of sin. In less skilled hands, this could be a disorienting mess of an infodump with no hope of salvaging an understandable story. Instead, almost all of the story takes place in Chime (with a few brief visits to one other domain), there's a tight focus on two specific characters and a relatively small assortment of enemies, allies, and political machinations. The types of mortals are described consistently, and more details are added gradually enough that I could get a strong sense of a few types before learning about a few more as they became more relevant. The Godless are a large enough group to have around half of the kinds of mortals, but they aren't some coincidentally complete assortment of all the types. Not every group is represented, which is consistent with how they have different experiences of their respective gods. The crueler the god is to their followers, the more likely it is that they wound up among the Godless, but it's not a strict correlation.
The Godless have rejected their deities, some of them due to a particular incident several years ago, but others with their own specific traumas, moments of disillusionment, and reasons to keep themselves apart from the divinities who shape their existences and treat them as playthings. One of my favorite parts of the setting is that within this focus on sin, redemption, and the divine, each of the gods has their own definition of what "sin" is. This emphasizes how unhelpful it is as a concept for those who spend their lives worried about sinning, and how useful it is as a tool for the gods to use the threat of damnation and divine displeasure to keep their mortals in line.
As the first book in a series, THE THIRTEENTH HOUR has its own story and a satisfying conclusion. It resolves several major plot points (both logistically and relationally) and ends with a paradigm shift which will have to be addressed in the following book. It's great as its own narrative, and as the beginning of the trilogy, and I'm very interested in what happens next.
The dynamic between Kayl, Quen, and Malk is not really a love triangle, and much more a story of Kayl and Quen figuring out their current relationships are abusive (to varying degrees) and going through the slow process of exiting them and trying for something better. Quen is nearly as emotionally entangled with Elijah as Kayl is with Malk. However, the fact that he has visions of each person's death when he touches them means he's not as physically intimate in that relationship, even as his internal life is frequently shaped by fears of Elijah's reaction to what he's doing. He's been removing his own memories in an attempt to keep control of his own mind, even if that control is at the cost of slowly losing himself. If you read THE THIRTEENTH HOUR hoping for a "girl picks between two guys" story, that's only technically part of what's happening and it might feel unsatisfying. It's a "two people pick between two other people" story, which is much clunkier to say and definitely not the point. Kayl's love for Malk is a constant motivation for her decisions with regards to Malk himself, but Quen's promise that they are partners in the investigation gradually becomes a stronger part of Kayl's choices and motivations. I did not read it as a love triangle, and so wasn't disappointed in any way by the narrative focus and how things develop between Kayl and Quen.
I love the characters and I'm deeply interested in the series as a whole. The world is changing and I want to know how they handle it.
The worldbuilding is complex and detailed, with twelve domains plus a hub world (Chime), special characteristics and abilities for the various kinds of mortals, and gods with their own agendas, mores, and conflicting definitions of sin. In less skilled hands, this could be a disorienting mess of an infodump with no hope of salvaging an understandable story. Instead, almost all of the story takes place in Chime (with a few brief visits to one other domain), there's a tight focus on two specific characters and a relatively small assortment of enemies, allies, and political machinations. The types of mortals are described consistently, and more details are added gradually enough that I could get a strong sense of a few types before learning about a few more as they became more relevant. The Godless are a large enough group to have around half of the kinds of mortals, but they aren't some coincidentally complete assortment of all the types. Not every group is represented, which is consistent with how they have different experiences of their respective gods. The crueler the god is to their followers, the more likely it is that they wound up among the Godless, but it's not a strict correlation.
The Godless have rejected their deities, some of them due to a particular incident several years ago, but others with their own specific traumas, moments of disillusionment, and reasons to keep themselves apart from the divinities who shape their existences and treat them as playthings. One of my favorite parts of the setting is that within this focus on sin, redemption, and the divine, each of the gods has their own definition of what "sin" is. This emphasizes how unhelpful it is as a concept for those who spend their lives worried about sinning, and how useful it is as a tool for the gods to use the threat of damnation and divine displeasure to keep their mortals in line.
As the first book in a series, THE THIRTEENTH HOUR has its own story and a satisfying conclusion. It resolves several major plot points (both logistically and relationally) and ends with a paradigm shift which will have to be addressed in the following book. It's great as its own narrative, and as the beginning of the trilogy, and I'm very interested in what happens next.
The dynamic between Kayl, Quen, and Malk is not really a love triangle, and much more a story of Kayl and Quen figuring out their current relationships are abusive (to varying degrees) and going through the slow process of exiting them and trying for something better. Quen is nearly as emotionally entangled with Elijah as Kayl is with Malk. However, the fact that he has visions of each person's death when he touches them means he's not as physically intimate in that relationship, even as his internal life is frequently shaped by fears of Elijah's reaction to what he's doing. He's been removing his own memories in an attempt to keep control of his own mind, even if that control is at the cost of slowly losing himself. If you read THE THIRTEENTH HOUR hoping for a "girl picks between two guys" story, that's only technically part of what's happening and it might feel unsatisfying. It's a "two people pick between two other people" story, which is much clunkier to say and definitely not the point. Kayl's love for Malk is a constant motivation for her decisions with regards to Malk himself, but Quen's promise that they are partners in the investigation gradually becomes a stronger part of Kayl's choices and motivations. I did not read it as a love triangle, and so wasn't disappointed in any way by the narrative focus and how things develop between Kayl and Quen.
I love the characters and I'm deeply interested in the series as a whole. The world is changing and I want to know how they handle it.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Grief, Religious bigotry, and Classism
Moderate: Confinement, Cursing, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Mental illness, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Slavery, Torture, Toxic relationship, Forced institutionalization, Kidnapping, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Toxic friendship, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Ableism, Incest, Miscarriage, Sexual content, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide, Excrement, Vomit, Cannibalism, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, and Pregnancy
bonriki's review against another edition
dark
emotional
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Wow, what an unexpected treat. I picked up this book a while ago as part of a charity fundraiser on r/Fantasy organized by a group of self-published authors and all I knew about it was that it had LGBT main characters. This is a gaslamp fantasy where twelve domains exist, each ruled by a different God. The gods can often be petty, cruel, and vindictive, demanding expensive tithes and killing mortals from their domain who have committed blasphemy. Mortals from each domain are unique and many seek refuge in a 13th world called Chime where they can live somewhat independently from their gods. Every domain has a theme and their mortals have powers related to those themes like the ability to control time and see a person’s past or the ability to see visions in dreams. The book revolves around a woman Kayl who is part of a resistance movement opposed to the tyranny of the gods and a warden Quentin who is charged with upholding Chimes laws and rooting out blasphemers to return to their gods for punishment.
This book packs a punch, the main theme of the book revolves around the dangers of religious extremism and how unjust it is to enforce one religion’s ideas of morality onto others who aren’t participants in that religion. It’s also got a lot to say about xenophobia and classism. Kayl is a fun character overall although she can be frustratingly naive and impulsive. Quen is a wonderfully nuanced character trying to be a decent person while employed in a thoroughly corrupt system. Fabulous book, highly recommend.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Genocide, Slavery, Trafficking, and Gaslighting
Moderate: Sexual assault and Sexual violence
Minor: Suicide attempt and Pregnancy