knightingale's review
1.0
The writing was poor, the characters were all Mary Sues and nothing was realistic or captivating about it. The main character also spent too much time focusing on her flaws.
lorimichele's review
4.0
I was given a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review. I loved the story..it could have been a 5 star review if there were not so many punctuation, grammar, and formatting errors.
egyptianspirit's review
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
5.0
I really liked this story. The characters were gripping and the storyline was good. At times I had to re read a certain line but other than that it was fantastic. I got into this book quite quickly and will definitely be buying the next book in the series. This is an author to watch out for.
lorijo's review
4.0
I was given a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review. I loved the story..it could have been a 5 star review if there were not so many punctuation, grammar, and formatting errors.
ciannareider's review
5.0
*A Copy of this Book Was Given To Me By The Author In Exchange For An Honest Review*
What a clever story! I think Lavinia, who I let wait on this review too long, has done an outstanding job giving us a fresh YA book, with a good message, and interesting characters. The first draft does have some editing errors, but the author reedited the book and it’s much smoother read, and really lets the reader stay completely engrossed in the story without being pulled out by editing issues. Erin is a lovely character, she’s strong, and resilient, and she really trying to keep her head up despite everything. I love seeing that in YA because we really need as many strong women as we can get to combat the Bella’s of the world. The action in this book was good, and it didn’t seem forced, it seems to flow well, and working in a YA paranormal book. I was interested, and on the edge of my seat for a lot of the book, and have to applaud that, because usually YA books to not keep me on edge, as so many tend to be overly predictable, and just have the same underlying story, but this book kept me interested with strong story, great action, and a little bit of romance. Sean is such a teenage heartthrob and I thought the bond between Kaseyrea and Erin was beautifully done. I’d highly suggest this book to readers of YA and even NA, who have a love of paranormal and action with some romance. It’s the beginning of a series, and I can definitely say it made me interested to read the rest of her books!
***Review has been done in conjunction with Nerd Girl Official. For more information regarding our reviews please visit our Fansite:www.facebook.com/NerdGirl.ng ***
What a clever story! I think Lavinia, who I let wait on this review too long, has done an outstanding job giving us a fresh YA book, with a good message, and interesting characters. The first draft does have some editing errors, but the author reedited the book and it’s much smoother read, and really lets the reader stay completely engrossed in the story without being pulled out by editing issues. Erin is a lovely character, she’s strong, and resilient, and she really trying to keep her head up despite everything. I love seeing that in YA because we really need as many strong women as we can get to combat the Bella’s of the world. The action in this book was good, and it didn’t seem forced, it seems to flow well, and working in a YA paranormal book. I was interested, and on the edge of my seat for a lot of the book, and have to applaud that, because usually YA books to not keep me on edge, as so many tend to be overly predictable, and just have the same underlying story, but this book kept me interested with strong story, great action, and a little bit of romance. Sean is such a teenage heartthrob and I thought the bond between Kaseyrea and Erin was beautifully done. I’d highly suggest this book to readers of YA and even NA, who have a love of paranormal and action with some romance. It’s the beginning of a series, and I can definitely say it made me interested to read the rest of her books!
***Review has been done in conjunction with Nerd Girl Official. For more information regarding our reviews please visit our Fansite:www.facebook.com/NerdGirl.ng ***
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