stephanienicole's review
2.0
The basic premise: You are a kid who receives telepathic communications from an alien.
The introduction is several pages long before you get to make your first decision. After my first decision, I only had two more decisions, and there were many pages between them. Everything in the story was given in great detail, but suddenly, the story ended in one extremely vague paragraph.
I went back to the first decision, and I chose the other choice, and that lead to a more fleshed-out story with a non-conclusive ending (meaning the initial crisis wasn't solved).
Overall, I didn't enjoy this Choose Your Own Adventure because there were too many pages to read between decisions and because I was expecting a scifi story and instead it was fantastical.
The introduction is several pages long before you get to make your first decision. After my first decision, I only had two more decisions, and there were many pages between them. Everything in the story was given in great detail, but suddenly, the story ended in one extremely vague paragraph.
I went back to the first decision, and I chose the other choice, and that lead to a more fleshed-out story with a non-conclusive ending (meaning the initial crisis wasn't solved).
Overall, I didn't enjoy this Choose Your Own Adventure because there were too many pages to read between decisions and because I was expecting a scifi story and instead it was fantastical.
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