michellini90's review
1.0
I skimmed, skimmed, and skimmed again, all in the hopes that this story would get the least bit interesting.... it never did, and don't get me started on that ending!
There was nothing to this story! It had a great plot line, but the author managed to completely destrot it by adding WAY to much sexual tension, rushing the ending, and making the heroics completely unbelievable. If it was up to me, I'd say this could use a total rewrite.
There was nothing to this story! It had a great plot line, but the author managed to completely destrot it by adding WAY to much sexual tension, rushing the ending, and making the heroics completely unbelievable. If it was up to me, I'd say this could use a total rewrite.
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