stierbri's review
2.0
Skip this one!
This could have been a great story, but so much is wrong. First, every time they use the word stomach, it’s spelled stoMach! Do some basic editing. The story was short and stilted. What’s going on, they say the world has changes, but don’t tell us much. Skip this one!
This could have been a great story, but so much is wrong. First, every time they use the word stomach, it’s spelled stoMach! Do some basic editing. The story was short and stilted. What’s going on, they say the world has changes, but don’t tell us much. Skip this one!
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