evil_jj's review against another edition
2.0
2.5 stars
Nice premise, but the story lacked character development, and too much was left off page (UST during massages, conversations where they got to know each other, sex after they resolved their miscommunication). Basically too much telling and not enough showing.
Nice premise, but the story lacked character development, and too much was left off page (UST during massages, conversations where they got to know each other, sex after they resolved their miscommunication). Basically too much telling and not enough showing.
suzy76's review against another edition
4.0
Cute, sweet and fluffy debut. Will definitely give this author another read.
rissa53's review against another edition
4.0
I always enjoy reading this author's stories!
I liked how Tomas and Darren got to know each other first and then exploded! ;) No heavy angst, actually very little to none. Just a sweet story about a guy super focused and the guy who made him let go! ♥
I liked how Tomas and Darren got to know each other first and then exploded! ;) No heavy angst, actually very little to none. Just a sweet story about a guy super focused and the guy who made him let go! ♥
afterwhat's review
2.0
This was on the front page of my library's ebook page, and It looked like something I'd like, so I checked it out. Opened it up, and it clocked in at a whopping 63 pages--so, not even a novella, a short story. Which is fine! And it was readable, but there wasn't any conflict or plot to speak of, and the characters were definitely not interesting enough to hold my attention for any longer. The writing was fine, though.
I have no complaints, as it was free and didn't take any time to read, but it wasn't awesome, either. I wouldn't seek out the author again.
I have no complaints, as it was free and didn't take any time to read, but it wasn't awesome, either. I wouldn't seek out the author again.
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