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obliquity's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
This is, of course, wild speculation, but it almost feels like a deadline loomed with an expected wordcount, and the author either lost interest partway through or just ran out of time to meet it in any other way. It's something I've seen before, but mostly in less experienced writers - I've even done it myself, back closer to when I started out, and it surprises me that somebody who has published this much has done so at this point in their career. Maybe it's just a stylistic choice, but it's not one that I enjoy.
As much as the middle dragged - and it really, really did - the ending felt very rushed. Shorter chapters, faster pace. Okay, that makes sense. But I would have liked a little more detail in the rounding up of things. The epilogue was pretty short and set two years later, and I feel like some of the stuff that might have been interesting to see immediately after the final chapter would have been more interesting to read that most of the rest of the book. I like characters learning lessons, working their way through things, but in all of these struggles, she didn't seem to actually learn anything on-page at all.
Elena was more interesting to read, and I think she and Ani were about the only characters I actually liked.
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Death, Blood, Murder, and Alcohol
Moderate: Gun violence and Sexual content
Minor: Animal death, Rape, Sexual assault, Suicide, and Death of parent
zombiezami's review against another edition
3.75
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Death, Violence, Blood, Stalking, and Murder
Moderate: Cursing, Infidelity, Misogyny, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Xenophobia, Vomit, Islamophobia, Death of parent, and Outing
Minor: Animal death, Gun violence, Suicide, Torture, and Abandonment
aykdanroyd's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Moderate: Addiction and Alcoholism
Minor: Animal death and Death of parent
moonlitnox's review against another edition
5.0
Graphic: Murder
Moderate: Animal death and Gun violence
Minor: Rape and Suicide