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scrubsandbooks's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Confinement and Violence
Moderate: Bullying, Sexual assault, and War
Minor: Slavery and Trafficking
takarakei's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
Graphic: Bullying, Confinement, and Violence
Moderate: Sexual assault, Xenophobia, and Trafficking
Minor: Rape and War
cozyscones's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Bullying, Confinement, Death, Violence, Xenophobia, Murder, and Sexual harassment
Moderate: Trafficking
Minor: War
wy_woman's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.25
Moderate: Confinement, Emotional abuse, Gore, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, War, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Minor: Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Torture, Trafficking, and Murder
starrysteph's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Sexual assault, Slavery, Violence, Xenophobia, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Abandonment, War, and Classism
gwenythepooh's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
I love the idea of the Danrayen characters and the Xena vibes I’m getting from them. I love the magic system and I love the arc the character is going through even though I can’t really get into the main character. My problem comes into the execution. The book feels incomplete. There are pacing issues, plot issues, and some of the writing falls flat due to those as well as variations in style of writing. I feel like this book could really have benefitted from the whole series being written and then broken into the separate books as this one felt like the first half of a book not a whole one.
Graphic: Confinement
Moderate: Gore, Xenophobia, and War
Minor: Sexual assault and Trafficking
lexi17d's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
The biggest critique I have of this book is the writing itself. I recognize this book is an independently published book and is the authors first novel, so I am overlooking simple editing errors in grammar, punctuation, sentence structure etc. (I’m no editor, so I can’t reliably comment on those anyways). However, many of the large plot points and scenes were quickly glossed over and briefly explained rather than shown, which threw the pacing off and left me feeling slightly unfulfilled. I think this book would have greatly benefited with an extra 50-100 pages to really fill out the story and add the detail, world building, and development of side characters that I felt was missing. As this is the first book in a series, I have confidence that it will only improve, though I wish we got to see more of what was happening with other characters later in the book, and got more context with the world earlier in the book. The ending was also very abrupt, and left me feeling confused.
That is all to say that I want more from this book! I think this is a great start for this author and series, and I will be continuing the series once the next books come out. I can’t wait to see how this author improves in the next books, and to see what happens next to our MC!
Graphic: Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Violence, Kidnapping, Murder, and Abandonment