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the_bookish_babee's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Graphic: Grief
Moderate: Violence, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Abandonment, War, and Classism
Minor: Death, Sexual assault, and Sexual harassment
mollybrector's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
The writing and pacing gives away this is Natalia Hernandez’s first book. This is not a bad thing in my eyes. I believe this author has a skill that will only flourish as she hones her craft. I look forward to continuing the series and seeing what happens next for our Name Bearer.
Minor: Death, Sexual assault, Trafficking, Murder, and Abandonment
erikagibson126's review against another edition
- Strong character development? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Child abuse, Confinement, Violence, Kidnapping, Abandonment, and War
Moderate: Bullying, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Slavery, Trafficking, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, and Sexual harassment
mandareads222's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Bullying, Death, Infidelity, Slavery, Violence, Blood, Medical content, Medical trauma, Murder, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Confinement, Sexual violence, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Pregnancy, Fire/Fire injury, Abandonment, Alcohol, and War
Minor: Animal cruelty, Pedophilia, Rape, Sexual assault, Torture, Excrement, and Vomit
ourxstorybegins's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Bullying, Confinement, and Violence
Moderate: Misogyny, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Sexual assault, Slavery, Trafficking, and Abandonment
naomiysl's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Graphic: Violence, Xenophobia, Abandonment, and War
Moderate: Bullying, Sexism, and Sexual violence
Minor: Slavery
charliebites's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.75
Moderate: Bullying, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, and Trafficking
Minor: Sexual assault, Slavery, Kidnapping, Murder, Abandonment, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
sopajoh's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.5
While not an egregious cliffhanger, there's a lot unresolved by the end. So glad the sequel is already out!
Moderate: Xenophobia
Minor: Rape, Slavery, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Abandonment, and War
Content warning spoiler:batesbarb's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
It's a self-published debut novel, and it really shows. The story seems very confused about who the audience is. It was publicized as an adult fantasy novel, but the writing feels like middle-grade or very young YA. There is basically no swearing or sexual content (there are one or two very chaste kisses), but there's plenty of violence, and the last 1/5th or so is extremely heavy on the threatened sexual violence. The author doesn't trust her readers to make any connections anywhere on their own, so everything is spelled out explicitly, often multiple times. I listened to the audiobook, and the narrator's style did not help matters at all. She sounded like she was telling a story to young, not very bright child. She also frequently just completely mispronounced fairly common words.
The story as a whole reads like a series of events with no real connection to each other. Everything is told, and nothing is ever shown. The main character forms friendships/budding romances that we are told (over, and over, and over) are deep and profound connections, but these friends just leave 2/3 of the way through the book, and it seems to have no actual effect on our protagonist.
It's also clear that this book is the setup for a series, there's an enormous amount of exposition and setup, but absolutely none of the plot threads or character beats get resolved at all. The book doesn't so much end as it just stops, literally in the middle of a conversation. I honestly thought that there was a glitch in my copy of the audiobook until I checked the reviews.
With a thorough and professional editor this, and the assumed sequel could probably have been made into a really compelling story, but as it is, this feels like beta reading someone's first or second draft of a story.
Moderate: Sexual violence, Slavery, Violence, Trafficking, and Abandonment
starrysteph's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Sexual assault, Slavery, Violence, Xenophobia, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Abandonment, War, and Classism