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the_bookish_babee's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Graphic: Grief
Moderate: Violence, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Abandonment, War, and Classism
Minor: Death, Sexual assault, and Sexual harassment
elliott_the_clementine's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Trafficking, Kidnapping, and War
Moderate: Sexual harassment
Minor: Pedophilia, Rape, Sexual assault, and Sexual violence
linze18's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Bullying and Violence
Moderate: Panic attacks/disorders and Murder
Minor: Trafficking and Sexual harassment
erikagibson126's review against another edition
- Strong character development? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Child abuse, Confinement, Violence, Kidnapping, Abandonment, and War
Moderate: Bullying, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Slavery, Trafficking, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, and Sexual harassment
lpantoja0295's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Moderate: Violence and Kidnapping
Minor: Sexual harassment
bkwrm1317's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
The following is a personal review, and does not reflect judging for Indie Ink 2024 judging I completed:
This was a really interesting novel, although there were odd breaks in the progress of the overall story arc as the protagonist went from one place (geographically) to another. This created a slightly disjointed/jarring reader experience for me, and also made the pacing feel slower than it would have otherwise, I think. I'd suggest the pacing of the novel is slow/medium, with some sections more solidly in each category.
The world building, magic system, and overall story was distinctive, if not unique. I wasn't particularly compelled by the use of Spanish words/how they were integrated - it didn't feel as thoughtful as some other Latine bilingual authors' works are in their use of English and Spanish words.
The end of the novel represents a fairly unsatisfying cliffhanger for me personally, as a reader, but would likely feel more compelling for other readers.
All CWs as mild, as there is either a brief/not emotionally intense engagement in the text with the CW, or it is threatened/mentioned, but not done (e.g. sexual harassment rather than sexual violence, as it was a verbal threat towards the protagonist, but not one that was carried through or anywhere near that).
Minor: Bullying, Death, Blood, Trafficking, and Sexual harassment
avacadosocks's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.75
Graphic: Violence
Moderate: Bullying, Confinement, Slavery, Xenophobia, Trafficking, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Sexual assault, Excrement, and War
charliebites's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.75
Moderate: Bullying, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, and Trafficking
Minor: Sexual assault, Slavery, Kidnapping, Murder, Abandonment, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
searobin's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
All in all, I loved how immersed we were in the story, but it is unusual for the genre.
Graphic: Animal death, Confinement, Death, Panic attacks/disorders, Physical abuse, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Medical content, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Murder, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, War, and Injury/Injury detail
cozyscones's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Bullying, Confinement, Death, Violence, Xenophobia, Murder, and Sexual harassment
Moderate: Trafficking
Minor: War