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shadowjana's review
2.0
okayyy so... confused about how I feel after this...
at the beginning it seemed like a pretty interesting story, had so much potential. beginning was interesting, I can even overlook kinda instant love thing going on, and the unnecessary repeated actions and events (sexual and cringe), and I can over look the underdevelopment of some aspects of it that could have been bigger then they were. I feel lineal the major plot points very good but kinda overlooked, she surprised us and then moved on to the same repetitive dialog between Ollie and Mia. I feel like she became in touch with her emotions pretty quacky but okay. after I passed half of the book it became boring. I was beginning to be interested when Maddie turned up but again... underdeveloped part of the plot. then I was super socked when we found out who was Ollies brother. but after that again... repetitive dialog. Mia was supposed to me girl with too much trauma who became psychopath but I just saw a girl who had trauma but also just cared about sex and was really depending on Ollie taking care of her. Ollie was supposed to be a boy with trauma with too strong emotions but I saw just a boy who needed an obsession. yes he was very kind and truly good and pure but also very possessive with mia, especially when, at the end of the book, we see his point of view on the first time he saw her. from the first moment he sawyer he describes her and home, a part of him, a girl who he loves an has to have lets say. like okay you like her that's normal but the was he describes it, pure obsession. thing he forgives her were really big and I think he should have needed more time to deal with it. he just kinda exits it. and end the end when he became emotionless it was very interesting. I think seeing him like that can be really fun but also I don't see her developing it as a story I would like to read. even at the end of this book she gives us a moment between them and he is supposed to be without emotion but he acts kinda nicer that I think he should. idk. making him scarier would be fun but I don't think I will continue reading it, story really has so much potential but she repeats thing over and over, dialogs became boring and the interesting parts are overlooked, she mostly gives us cringe parts too be honest.
at the beginning it seemed like a pretty interesting story, had so much potential. beginning was interesting, I can even overlook kinda instant love thing going on, and the unnecessary repeated actions and events (sexual and cringe), and I can over look the underdevelopment of some aspects of it that could have been bigger then they were. I feel lineal the major plot points very good but kinda overlooked, she surprised us and then moved on to the same repetitive dialog between Ollie and Mia. I feel like she became in touch with her emotions pretty quacky but okay. after I passed half of the book it became boring. I was beginning to be interested when Maddie turned up but again... underdeveloped part of the plot. then I was super socked when we found out who was Ollies brother. but after that again... repetitive dialog. Mia was supposed to me girl with too much trauma who became psychopath but I just saw a girl who had trauma but also just cared about sex and was really depending on Ollie taking care of her. Ollie was supposed to be a boy with trauma with too strong emotions but I saw just a boy who needed an obsession. yes he was very kind and truly good and pure but also very possessive with mia, especially when, at the end of the book, we see his point of view on the first time he saw her. from the first moment he sawyer he describes her and home, a part of him, a girl who he loves an has to have lets say. like okay you like her that's normal but the was he describes it, pure obsession. thing he forgives her were really big and I think he should have needed more time to deal with it. he just kinda exits it. and end the end when he became emotionless it was very interesting. I think seeing him like that can be really fun but also I don't see her developing it as a story I would like to read. even at the end of this book she gives us a moment between them and he is supposed to be without emotion but he acts kinda nicer that I think he should. idk. making him scarier would be fun but I don't think I will continue reading it, story really has so much potential but she repeats thing over and over, dialogs became boring and the interesting parts are overlooked, she mostly gives us cringe parts too be honest.
renee_reads_romance's review against another edition
emotional
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
5.0
sseadgnr's review against another edition
emotional
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
wattpad literature at its finest: insta love, cheesy romance, and trauma dump—and guess what? it’s my guilty pleasure.
gemmaisaiahs's review
2.0
a pesar de que me estaba gustando, había muchas cosas que me desesperaron y que no me gustaron
jackiee's review
dark
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
3.0
ancthrlove1's review
dark
emotional
sad
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
alexcisrylander's review
2.0
This was an ok read for me. Kinda juvenile, I found myself forcing myself to finish just because I hate not finishing a book I’ve started. Forgettable and tbh predictable.
jiyona's review
4.0
would not know where to start in explaining how i felt about this book. It would be too confusing
love you Mia
ur worth it ollie
ur an icon Jake
preach it zeke-
love you Mia
ur worth it ollie
ur an icon Jake
preach it zeke-