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adventurous
emotional
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I want to see more character development from Abbi sooooo badđŁ I hate reading about her being this whiny, insecure girl with a perverted side to her being she canât stop watching people fuck. Like seriously wtf is that about?! âIt is making me extremely uncomfortable to be put in this positionâ yet she actively chooses to stay and watch people she doesnât like or know for that matter, be sexually intimate with other strangers. ALSO, the constant disrespect she takes from other people whether it be family or people from her town and even Henry at times makes me wanna slap her straight. Is it really that hard to not be a people pleaser to people who are talking shit about you to your face and behind your back? Trusttttt that if I were in her position, I wouldâve set those hypothetical mfs in their place for thinking they have a right to meddle in my personal life and feel like they have a right to comment about how im ânot acting like myselfâ just people im not bending backwards to do their bidding. Thereâs just sm that could be done to help mature Abbi into the bright young woman that she is instead of writing her character as someone thatâs so heavily dickmatized and canât think for herself. Donât even get me started on the man that sheâs so obsessed about. Thereâs absolutely so romantic chemistry between the two mcâs other than their sexual attraction to each other and his rare materialistic acts of service. All they do is fuck, fuck, fuck. Ik this is an erotica but DAMN can there be one genuinely wholesome scene that actually makes me wanna root for the coupleâď¸đ
Graphic: Cursing, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Medical content, Religious bigotry, Car accident, Gaslighting, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Death of parent