candidceillie's review
3.0
This story is short, hot, and low on real drama. I'm intrigued by the world that was set up in this short story, but I didn't get a good sense of the romance between the two main characters here. It goes straight from them barely speaking but lusting after each other to literally fucking in the bakery.
I felt like it needed to be a little longer and show a little more of them getting to know each other. However, I'd love to read more.
I felt like it needed to be a little longer and show a little more of them getting to know each other. However, I'd love to read more.
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