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The Long Game by Elena Armas

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lovelymisanthrope's review against another edition

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Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

I picked this up because it is the latest release from Elena Armas and I wanted to see if the magic of "The Spanish Love Deception" would be in this book.
"The Long Game" is a dual perspective romance that follows Adalyn Reyes and Cameron Caldani. After a messy PR disaster involving the mascot for the team she works for, the club owner, who is Adalyn's father, sends her to the middle of nowhere North Carolina to help whip a mystery team into shape. It is to her complete shock that this mystery team is actually a bunch of 9-year-old girls. Cameron is the couch of the girls' team, and he has a past he is running from as well. He used to be the star goal keep for a very successful team, but he left all of that behind so that he could live in anonymity.
This story took me about a third of the way to finally get into. Adalyn's and Cam's chemistry did not feel real until they started to get to know each other, because at the beginning they both truly lamented one another. Hate to love is such a delicate line to walk, but by the end of the book I was rooting for them to have their happily ever after.
My biggest gripe with this book is that the plot felt thin. Adalyn was sent to this place and given no preparations as to what she was getting into, but she dove headfirst because she wanted to appease her father and make amends for the team she loves. I found it infuriating and slightly unbelievable that her father did not try to defend her at all, and rather than talk to her or hear her out, he just sent her away. And even more shocking, Adalyn did not question him or try to fight to keep her job. Cam wanted to leave the world of professional sports behind and lead a quiet life, which is believable, but NO ONE recognized him in this small town. That I find highly unlikely, and the only real explanation the reader is given is that he has a beard now, so people do not recognize him. It did not take Adalyn long to realize who he was, and I think in retrospect that should have been happening more frequently for him.
Cam is a very possessive man, but in a good way. He wants to take care of Adalyn so that she can feel loved and protected, like someone is in her court. I did enjoy seeing him become so quickly invested in her and her well-being. This possessiveness also translated into some very hot scenes between the pair.
Adalyn felt unoriginal to me. She came from a wealthy family and because of that things were handed to her and now she wants to prove to everyone that she is independent and can make it on her own. Because of that, she continually puts herself in bad situations. She is really bad at asking for help, and believes she is unworthy of love. Rather than these qualities adding to the tension between her and Cam, I just felt annoyed by her because it was so cliche.
The end of the epilogue leaves a bit of a cliffhanger for a new character's story, and I am VERY intrigued and hopeful that we will get that book next.
Overall, this is my least favorite from Elena Armas, but I still had a good time reading it, and I would recommend it to those who enjoy sports romances.

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samchase112's review against another edition

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Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

I’m always blessed to have another Elena Armas romance in my hands! While I didn’t enjoy this one as much as her last, and certainly not as much as her first, the chemistry between the characters and the slow-burn buildup were still top-notch. There was a lot going on here, and sometimes I think we lost the plot for a bit, but nevertheless I really enjoyed my time spent in Green Oak :)

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rickireadss's review

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4.0

ahhhh elena did it again. was it my favorite? no i think that it reserved for lucas and rosie, but i still had a great time with this one.

i really just wanted them to both get the f*ck out of their own ways because i just knew they would be fire together. i loved the small town aspect. LOVED the girls on the team so much, especially maria <3 i will say the ending??? through me for a curve, i did NOT see that coming

the fact that adalyn and josie were still trying to talk to the a**hole they call a dad in the epilogue made me mad -like f*ck that dude but whatever

it was slow burn but boyyyyy was it hot

i was taken out of the moment though when the whole discussion around protection came up and she was like "i'm clean" - like can we PLEASE change this wording in romance novels??? every time it happens, i'm instantly taken out of the scene. you can easily say "i'm negative" or "all my tests came back fine" - it''s just my hate for the stigmization of STDs/STIs, mini rant over

ALSO, i am very excited for the next book between josie and matthew - like i have a really good feeling about it because of their little interaction there at the end ;)

⚠️: panic attacks/disorders, emotional abuse, toxic relationship (FMC & father), gaslighting, misogyny, injury/injury detail, stalking, death of parent, violence, house break-in, car accident

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pagebypaigebks's review against another edition

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3.0

“Like she can finally be at ease. Like she was scared but now she’s okay. Because with me, she’s always, always safe.”

Thank you to Simon and Schuster Canada for sending me an ARC copy in exchange for an honest review.

I've also posted this review on Instagram and my blog.

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Content Warnings: panic attacks, toxic relationships, gaslighting, mention of stalking

The premise of this book had a lot of promise! I loved the idea of a high end executive helping out a kids team. My favourite parts were Adalyn and Cameron's interactions with the players! The kids and the other townspeople were fun to read about and had funny moments that made me smile. Unfortunately, I would have liked to see more development from our main characters. So I didn't connect with them as much as I would have liked. However, the side characters really captured my attention with their backstories and personalities! Overall, the writing style was easy to follow and made this a quick read.

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purplepenning's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful lighthearted slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes

Strong Roy Kent / brunch daddy vibes, but alas — the story as a whole didn't work for me. I'm not sure how a book with a growly retired soccer player coaching a quirky small town U10 girls team while dealing with a menagerie of mischievous farm animals managed to both bore and annoy me, but it did. I couldn't connect with the boss babe main character, thought the story was slow-going until the last quarter, yet still felt the characters were under-developed.

I think I'll just have to accept that this author isn't for me. A previous title was a DNF and this one was one goat and a spunky 8-year-old away from the same fate.

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drtx_bwt's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful lighthearted medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? N/A
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A

5.0

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marywahlmeierbracciano's review against another edition

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emotional slow-paced

Strong character development? Yes

4.0

With The Long Game, Queen Elena Armas has gifted us with a woodsy small town romance featuring a strong but sensitive ex-pro footballer opposite a guarded girlboss who doesn’t know her worth. Both are running away and healing from something, whether they like it or not. He’s super competitive; she’s in crisis mode. I absolutely loved the setting, premise, and characters—the execution was a little clumsy at times, but it was so worth it in the end! Shane East’s narration of Cam—who is such a sweet and sexy caretaking hero—was *chef’s kiss*.

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readwithria's review against another edition

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emotional funny lighthearted medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

The Long Game was such a fun time!

I love Elena Armas’ writing so much, and The Long Game was another great book full of cute banter, lovable characters, and slow burn tension.

Read if you you love
⚽️ Sports romance
⚽️ Small town
⚽️ Grumpy/grumpy
⚽️ Forced proximity
⚽️ Caregiving
⚽️ Cute nicknames
⚽️ Even cuter animals

I will say that one of the reasons I don’t love “enemies” to lovers in contemporary romance is because the characters often don’t spend a lot of time actually liking each other because there has to be the setup of the meet messy, and this book was no exception. I think that the last 40 pages felt a bit rushed, and made the conflict and resolution feel like an afterthought.

This book was pretty much exactly what I’ve come to expect from Elena Armas, and I can’t wait to read what she writes next! 4 stars.

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beckyyreadss's review against another edition

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emotional lighthearted medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

I loved the American Roommate Experiment and I've been waiting for Elena’s next work, so when this was announced I was jumping at the bit for it to be released and this book was slightly hit and miss for me.

This book has two points of view, the first is Adalyn Reyes and she has spent years perfecting her daily routine: wake up at dawn, drive to the Miami Flames FC offices, try her hardest to leave a mark, go home and repeat. So when her routine is disrupted after a video of her in an altercation with the team’s mascot goes viral. Rather than fire hr, the team’s owner – who happens to be her father – sends Adalyn to middle-of-nowhere North Carolina, where she’s tasked with turning around the struggling local soccer team, the Green Warriors, as a way to redeem herself. Her plans start to crumble before she gets started as she discovers that the players wear tutus to practice, keep pet goats, and are terrified on Adalyn and are nine-year-old kids. The second point of view is Cameron Caldani, a goalkeeping prodigy whose presence in North Carolina is somewhat of a mystery. He is currently hiding away after his sudden retirement. Cameron is the perfect candidate to help Adalyn, but after one very unfortunate first encounter involving a rooster, Cam’s leg and Adalyn’s bumper, he is set on getting rid of her as soon as possible. But banishment is not an option for Adalyn. Not again. Helping this ragtag children’s team is her road to redemption, and she is playing the long game. With or without Cam’s help.

It hurt me to say that this book dragged. I thought I would love it because it’s involving football and it’s a sexy British goalkeeper. This was supposed to be the book I enjoyed – it's British humour, broody dark man and I was just wanting more. Adalyn was all over the place – now I love messed up characters and usually relate to them often. But she was described as a mean Ice Queen but was then instantly crying the second that something nice happened to her or someone insulted her.

One of my favourite things about this book is Josie. She was so funny and just such a small-town person where she’s in everyone’s business, but she only wants the best for everyone. I loved the girls football team in this. I am glad it was a girl’s football team and not a male football team where they are all pining over Adalyn. I love the tension in this book and Elena always manages to write the men that everyone is wanting, but I felt that the plot was just all over the place and that both of the MCs have personality disorder – both of their moods were giving me whiplash.

I really hope the second book is to do with Josie. I love her and I want more of her and this town.

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Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

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