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alexiasambrano's review against another edition
dark
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
At first, I liked the book. The pacing in the beginning was definitely a lot faster than the middle, though the pacing picked up again towards the end.
I’ll start with what I enjoyed: I thought the building of the mystery was good, and, though flip-floppy, the perspective-switching from Claire to third-person accounts of the unfolding events, to Clive and other resort-dwellers provided much-needed context for the ongoing mystery.
What I disliked: In general, I intensely dislike books written by white authors that speak on or about the experiences of non-white people. And this book did exactly that. Much about Clive and Edwin’s upbringing, Clive’s experience in New York, and even the language being used to describe other island natives seemed distorted and overexaggerated for a white gaze. The cherry on top was that it was clear from the beginning that the author was attempting to craft a personality in Allison of arrogance and self-righteousness rooted in an “im not like other white people” mentality. At few points, the author does point that Allison herself is aware of this fact and is embarrassed by it, but it still feels icky to read a story of a white girl’s death and her interactions with Black men leading up to her death. I just feel this is an inappropriate story for a white woman to be writing. The author, and thus Allison’s self-awareness in terms of her white privilege isn’t really put to use beyond just identifying that this privilege, and their “discomfort” being surrounded by Black island natives as white people raised in predominantly white communities is somehow “natural.” Newsflash: it’s not natural, you’re just racist at worst, and implicitly biased at the very least.
Side note: towards the end, there’s quite a bit of what I would identify as “victim-blaming” or “slut shaming” in addition to heavily patriarchal values rooted in the sexual conquest of young college-aged girls. I just felt icky reading this, but I kept reading with hopes that it would get better. It didn’t.
I’ll start with what I enjoyed: I thought the building of the mystery was good, and, though flip-floppy, the perspective-switching from Claire to third-person accounts of the unfolding events, to Clive and other resort-dwellers provided much-needed context for the ongoing mystery.
What I disliked: In general, I intensely dislike books written by white authors that speak on or about the experiences of non-white people. And this book did exactly that. Much about Clive and Edwin’s upbringing, Clive’s experience in New York, and even the language being used to describe other island natives seemed distorted and overexaggerated for a white gaze. The cherry on top was that it was clear from the beginning that the author was attempting to craft a personality in Allison of arrogance and self-righteousness rooted in an “im not like other white people” mentality. At few points, the author does point that Allison herself is aware of this fact and is embarrassed by it, but it still feels icky to read a story of a white girl’s death and her interactions with Black men leading up to her death. I just feel this is an inappropriate story for a white woman to be writing. The author, and thus Allison’s self-awareness in terms of her white privilege isn’t really put to use beyond just identifying that this privilege, and their “discomfort” being surrounded by Black island natives as white people raised in predominantly white communities is somehow “natural.” Newsflash: it’s not natural, you’re just racist at worst, and implicitly biased at the very least.
Side note: towards the end, there’s quite a bit of what I would identify as “victim-blaming” or “slut shaming” in addition to heavily patriarchal values rooted in the sexual conquest of young college-aged girls. I just felt icky reading this, but I kept reading with hopes that it would get better. It didn’t.
Graphic: Child death, Death, Drug use, Misogyny, Grief, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Alcoholism, Racism, Sexism, Sexual content, Violence, and Pregnancy
abicaro17's review against another edition
challenging
dark
emotional
mysterious
reflective
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
This book was so good and had potential! Unfortunately it falls flat. They kinda explain what happens to Allison but then they dont? Like they just kinda fill in the blank with the "most likely scenario" and left it at that. Also what the hell happened to Clive?! Like Sara gets an epilogue and not Clive?! Disrespectful. Also the whole befriending the dude you think murdered your sister is insane. Like the book could have been so cool but the end is boring and kinda predictable.
Graphic: Alcoholism, Body horror, Body shaming, Bullying, Cancer, Cursing, Death, Drug use, Mental illness, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual content, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Grief, Stalking, Murder, Cultural appropriation, Gaslighting, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
nikkioles's review against another edition
mysterious
sad
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Moderate: Misogyny
Minor: Death
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