amyiw's review
3.0
3 and just barely.
Another 'Mars needs women' plot. A bit silly with a silly protagonist, who continues to use expression like "fiddledeedee" and "great balls of fire" though she also used damn so didn't understand this use.. World is interesting but the plot is only OK/good. Female MC is a bit unreal and the romance a real insta love and expecting it back, which it comes, of course. The sexy times was pretty good but it wasn't enough for erotica. Not sure if this was trying for that or scifi romance, I think the later. So I enjoyed it but won't read on as it just isn't that compelling. If I hadn't just read another MNW plot, I might have liked this better but that one was better than this one. And the constant use of these nonsense exclamations kept on taking me out of the story.
Another 'Mars needs women' plot. A bit silly with a silly protagonist, who continues to use expression like "fiddledeedee" and "great balls of fire" though she also used damn so didn't understand this use.. World is interesting but the plot is only OK/good. Female MC is a bit unreal and the romance a real insta love and expecting it back, which it comes, of course. The sexy times was pretty good but it wasn't enough for erotica. Not sure if this was trying for that or scifi romance, I think the later. So I enjoyed it but won't read on as it just isn't that compelling. If I hadn't just read another MNW plot, I might have liked this better but that one was better than this one. And the constant use of these nonsense exclamations kept on taking me out of the story.
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