mousegoddess's review
2.0
Yay giveaways
okay I'm gonna add a little caveat to start. The giveaway said this was an ARC even tho Goodreads says it's been published so some of my issues might be resolved in the finished product.
my main issue is that I'd see sentences or paragraphs that were too much show, not enough tell. they read like a placeholder for actual story. I also felt like the pacing was not the greatest. I understand the time limitations inherent in the plot device, but it still felt like shit was just shoehorned in.
that said, the basic plot and idea were a nifty combination and THAT is something I liked.
okay I'm gonna add a little caveat to start. The giveaway said this was an ARC even tho Goodreads says it's been published so some of my issues might be resolved in the finished product.
my main issue is that I'd see sentences or paragraphs that were too much show, not enough tell. they read like a placeholder for actual story. I also felt like the pacing was not the greatest. I understand the time limitations inherent in the plot device, but it still felt like shit was just shoehorned in.
that said, the basic plot and idea were a nifty combination and THAT is something I liked.
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