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Derby Horse by Mara Dabrishus

cpcabaniss's review against another edition

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4.0

*I received a copy of this novel from the author in exchange for an honest review.*

It can be hard to find good equestrian fiction. More times than not, there is something off in the balance of the story. Either the horse bits are glaringly wrong, the writing is stilted, or the horses end up making a very minimal appearance, serving as little more than a plot device. After this, the fourth novel of Mara's that I have read, I still believe she gets it right.

Here we follow July Carter as she embarks on new adventures both at the track and in the dressage arena. This is the third in a five book series, and while I do think that it is slightly weaker than the preceding novels, it's still a solid addition to the story. Middle books, which are often the "bridge" books in a series, connecting the beginning to the end, often fall a little short, but this one clearly sets us up and points us toward what has the potential to be a great conclusion.

I don't want to go into too many details about the plot, since this is a later book in the series, but it deals with just what the title says: will they have a horse in the Kentucky Derby?

All of the horse stuff made me itch to get back in the saddle. It also made me think about what my life could have been, had I followed any of those crazy daydreams I had as a teenager. Some of those dreams are still attainable, and I still have my horses to ride, so they haven't all died over the years.

July is very relatable, even some of the more negative aspects of her character. She always feels that she has to fix things, or that she understands more than might be reality, or that she is integral to everything working. Some of these things can get a little grating, but sometimes it's because they hit too close to home and not because they are over the top.

Beck is still the Beck that I grew to love in Stay the Distance, just a little more grown up now. I was glad that we got so much of him in this installment and hope that there is more to come in the future.

This was overall an excellent read and I highly recommend it to anyone who wants to read about horses or enjoys young adult contemporary/romance fiction. The setting might be a little different than you are used to, but I think a lot of people would enjoy it if they give it a chance.

wordsofclover's review against another edition

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4.0

I received a free digital copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.

Derby horse is the third book following July Carter as she weaves her way through horse racing, dressage dreams and boyfriend drama. In this book, July is starting her dream college at last with her horse Kali and hopes to become a dressage superstar team. She also is cementing her relationship with Beck even further as the two work on getting his horse to where he needs to be in the racing world.

It wasn’t much of a surprise to me that I really loved this book once I allowed myself to settle down and dive into the story. There’s something about July and everything she is going through and dealing with that always feels really authentic and real.

This book wasn’t so much of an emotional rollercoaster as the previous book but July still has a lot to get used to like her new college classes as well as her work in the racing stables (which honestly I’m amazed she was able to do everything because wow!) She’s also dealing with mom back in her life in more normal circumstances, and we’re seeing July and Martina still figuring out how they want the relationship to work out.

As always, I adore Beck and I think I finally figured out one of the reasons why I love him so much in this book - he reminds me of Peter K in Jenny Hans To All the boys I’ve Loved Before trilogy. He’s popular and very good-looking but he’s always honest, earnest and kind, and basically just completely lovable.

I love how July tackled wanting to lose her virginity in this book. She knew that it was something she wanted to do, and that in the moment it felt right. It was made obvious they used protection from the mention of the condom wrapper on the floor the next day, which is so important in any kind of YA novel. I love that she didn’t feel ay guilt or ‘brand new woman’ revelations afterwards. She had sex, she enjoyed it and that was that. LOVE.

Also a short note that I love that these books are set in New York but a completely different New York we normally see in media. It’s not all traffic packed streets and the only time we’re in the city is when July is visiting Beck.

I loved seeing more of July’s dressage lessons too. I’m not big into dressage and I’m more of a jumper, if I had a horse and could choose one obviously, so it’s interesting for me to see more of the dressage world and what kind of work and commands go into it.

One of the things I would love to see in this book is the mention of menstruation which probably sounds weird but I feel like in July’s story so far, we have seen her deal with lots of normal teenage, coming into adulthood stuff, from family drama, new love, sex, college decisions, etc and now I’d love to see her deal with her period as well as having to be on a horse all day because if anyone who has periods know, it’s pretty uncomfortable ton the back of a horse and I’d love to see how July deals with it, as well as that PMS and cramping - I think it would be some great representation.
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