pelicanfreak's review
3.0
The basis for this story is just a really interesting concept. It is well described neat and well edited. It is well imagined but it could use more explanation or detail - it is set in the future but some of it still seems unbelievable. The trust they put into complete strangers isn't believable as it's presented, but could be made believable with some more details explained I think.
I think I got a clear picture of the situation but I cannot be certain - I could use just a little more description. I do like that it is such a quick read and I do like the characters. I think with a bit more development they and their story could be quite intriguing.
I think I got a clear picture of the situation but I cannot be certain - I could use just a little more description. I do like that it is such a quick read and I do like the characters. I think with a bit more development they and their story could be quite intriguing.
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