ashatroyal's review
emotional
hopeful
lighthearted
medium-paced
2.75
Melanie has taken her ex-husband to the bank and is now moving on with her life. Here enters retired football player Warrick aka Master Dom. These two instantly hit it off and I enjoyed reading about their exploration of each other. Harder topics were discussed like being a parent to teens, child abuse and divorce.
Melanie pissed me off using her safe word. Girl grow up. He didn’t even do anything to you. The BDSM was super light and I wish the two would’ve explored way more since he said what they did didn’t even scratch the surface. Although the dom/sub relationship can be different with each person, these two didn’t really have that type of relationship outside of the bedroom even though it was talked about a lot. I felt in sone ways War loosened his control versus Mel embracing the lifestyle. Compromise I guess.
A few misused words.
Melanie pissed me off using her safe word. Girl grow up. He didn’t even do anything to you. The BDSM was super light and I wish the two would’ve explored way more since he said what they did didn’t even scratch the surface. Although the dom/sub relationship can be different with each person, these two didn’t really have that type of relationship outside of the bedroom even though it was talked about a lot. I felt in sone ways War loosened his control versus Mel embracing the lifestyle. Compromise I guess.
A few misused words.
Content Warnings
Minor: Cancer, Adult/minor relationship, Infidelity, Death of parent, Pedophilia, Child abuse, Sexual assault, Rape, and Physical abuse
treberry's review
3.5
3.5 ⤴️
I haven’t read an erotic story in a while, but it was well worth the wait with this one. 4 letters - BDSM! Baby
I haven’t read an erotic story in a while, but it was well worth the wait with this one. 4 letters - BDSM! Baby
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