laurla's review against another edition
2.0
-2 stars. kindle 244 pages.
-multi-author series. i didn't care for this authors writing. i ended up skimming a lot of this book because it was excessive details that were unnecessary to the story. and it felt like there wasn't much to the story parts. i think with appropriate editing this could have been a short story, not a novel.
"you presume more than any woman in my experience."
"then you must be a man of very little experience with women."
"you were looking right at me, gideon, looking for me, so blinded by your narrow-mindedness that you couldn't possibly see me as your equal."
"[gideon] dismissed her and her intelligence work as though she'd high-jacked the code name from a more deserving agent. her allegiance and experience held no more value to him than a toast crumb settled on his sleeve, brushed away and easily forgotten."
-multi-author series. i didn't care for this authors writing. i ended up skimming a lot of this book because it was excessive details that were unnecessary to the story. and it felt like there wasn't much to the story parts. i think with appropriate editing this could have been a short story, not a novel.
"you presume more than any woman in my experience."
"then you must be a man of very little experience with women."
"you were looking right at me, gideon, looking for me, so blinded by your narrow-mindedness that you couldn't possibly see me as your equal."
"[gideon] dismissed her and her intelligence work as though she'd high-jacked the code name from a more deserving agent. her allegiance and experience held no more value to him than a toast crumb settled on his sleeve, brushed away and easily forgotten."
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