natverse's review against another edition
4.0
I would not call Arrow's smaller bunny disguise brilliant, Julia. He is still a bunny. With a large key around his tiny little grey head. I think the better disguise is that he is virtually invisible to everyone but the first child he meets on his way from the other world.
Now, I am no expert in magic bunny negotiations, but are you telling me no compromise was reached in all this time? It seems ridiculous. Instead the dark bunnies are this slowly encroaching threat to their meadow, but only if they can get their grassy paws on the key. Would it not benefit the dark bunnies to pretend to negotiate and share the land and THEN steal the key like the backstabbing buns I know they can be?
Also I was most impressed with this book out of the series. The sexual tension between Lex and Ellie is palatable. I would read a whole spin-off story about their Beatrice-and-Benedick-like romance.
Okay, I need to mention the elephant in the room. Is Mr. Potter some random creep watching a group of kids camp? And if he's giving them points does this mean it's a Hogwarts camp? If this is the case, and we assume this is in the UK because of the author's origins, does this make Mr. Potter an elderly Harry Potter, professor of DADA at Hogwarts and balding camp counselor during the summer? And if THAT is the case, does he suspect Arrow is present and is he secretly helping the magic bunny warren? Will the wizarding world help stop the dark bunnies?
I have too many questions now and aterrible great idea for a fanfiction crossover.
Now, I am no expert in magic bunny negotiations, but are you telling me no compromise was reached in all this time? It seems ridiculous. Instead the dark bunnies are this slowly encroaching threat to their meadow, but only if they can get their grassy paws on the key. Would it not benefit the dark bunnies to pretend to negotiate and share the land and THEN steal the key like the backstabbing buns I know they can be?
Also I was most impressed with this book out of the series. The sexual tension between Lex and Ellie is palatable. I would read a whole spin-off story about their Beatrice-and-Benedick-like romance.
Okay, I need to mention the elephant in the room. Is Mr. Potter some random creep watching a group of kids camp? And if he's giving them points does this mean it's a Hogwarts camp? If this is the case, and we assume this is in the UK because of the author's origins, does this make Mr. Potter an elderly Harry Potter, professor of DADA at Hogwarts and balding camp counselor during the summer? And if THAT is the case, does he suspect Arrow is present and is he secretly helping the magic bunny warren? Will the wizarding world help stop the dark bunnies?
I have too many questions now and a
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