drennagurl's review
4.0
Actual review is a 4.5
So this is my first time reading anything by Ms Norfleet and I must say I am pleasantly surprised!! She has a great way of incorporating real life into fiction and making you feel as if the scenes are playing out right before your eyes.
I knew the character Vincent was too good to be true and I can not wait to see how the next part of this story pans out. Victoria was a little naive to be so trusting of Vincent but, overall she is an awesome character ... a real sweetheart. There were a few misspelled words but all in all this was a great short! I will definitely be checking out more of Ms Norfleet 's work in the future :-)
So this is my first time reading anything by Ms Norfleet and I must say I am pleasantly surprised!! She has a great way of incorporating real life into fiction and making you feel as if the scenes are playing out right before your eyes.
I knew the character Vincent was too good to be true and I can not wait to see how the next part of this story pans out. Victoria was a little naive to be so trusting of Vincent but, overall she is an awesome character ... a real sweetheart. There were a few misspelled words but all in all this was a great short! I will definitely be checking out more of Ms Norfleet 's work in the future :-)
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