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schnaucl's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
I can't imagine how terrifying it would be if any time you came into contact with water it cost you some of your memory. Â And how long would it take to figure out that's what happened, especially if you lived alone?
I also wonder how many people deliberately stood outside in the rain and deliberately lost themselves, particularly if they thought they couldn't make it past the military blockade. Â Would that be better or worse than being shot? Â The death would certainly be prolonged and death by starvation isn't pretty but if you're not aware enough to know that's what's happening or to be aware of your hunger maybe that's kinder?
As to the ending, if time is of the essence, I'm not sure it makes sense that she let the child cry for her mother for three minutes.  It certainly makes for a dramatic end though. I'm also wondering how old the kid was supposed to be when she was allowed to read the journal/diary.
Anyway, it's a really interesting concept.
Moderate: Death, Toxic friendship, Gaslighting, and Confinement
Minor: Suicide, Animal death, Child death, Murder, and Suicidal thoughts
jstilts's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Confinement, Panic attacks/disorders, and Pandemic/Epidemic
Moderate: Police brutality
Minor: Dementia, Suicidal thoughts, and Panic attacks/disorders
not_another_ana's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
A droplet's all it takes for confusion to set in. You lose your days as if they were melting off, going further and further into your past. Little sugar dolls left in the rain, that's what we are now.
In the town of Aloisville the rain takes memories. One drop is enough to cause confusion, more than that will do away with hours, then days, until its taken all that makes you a person. Laverne cannot remember when it all started but she does her best to not forget anything important by keeping a journal of the events. Little by little facts of the matter are revealed to us, like how the town seems to be under quarantine and surrounded by the military, or how the leftover residents are coping with this extraordinary event. Whatever is happening will force the citizens into a dangerous path.
Told through Laverne's journal entries this was a great read. The main character's voice is sharp and intelligent, and the narration is tense. The concept was fascinating, an exploration of the connection between memory and sanity. It never lowered the stakes, it just keep getting more and more complex. This book had me audibly saying FUCK twice, I was surprised that such a short novella had these powerful twists and turns. I cannot wait to read more of this author's output.
Graphic: Suicidal thoughts and Death
anna_hepworth's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
It is a story about forgetting, about an apocalypse--or maybe a pandemic--where one can survive, but not thrive. About the slow erosion of memory and the loss of self that goes with that.Â
There is no logic to what is going on, no explanation. Laverne, who is writing the diary, doesn't know the why. They know some of the what is happening in the now, and some memory of the bad things that have happened, but there is no indication that this is all the bad, just all the bad that they have remembered. Â
Moderate: Medical trauma, Injury/Injury detail, Murder, Dementia, Body horror, Suicidal thoughts, and Gun violence
Minor: Child death
caterina_1212's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Minor: Gun violence, Suicidal thoughts, and Vomit
f18's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Death
Moderate: Suicidal thoughts and Gaslighting
Minor: Gun violence, Injury/Injury detail, Medical content, Police brutality, Cursing, and Panic attacks/disorders
grimdark_dad's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Moderate: Death, Violence, Animal death, Child death, Gun violence, Suicidal thoughts, Grief, and Kidnapping
kristinvaldez's review against another edition
4.25
Journal entries from an old woman living in a town where the water and rain wipes away your memory. We follow her through suicide thoughts, loneliness, happiness and determination. Â
This book is very short so there isn’t much I can say that won’t give it away.  Is there action? No. Do you have a mystery you solve during reading? No. It’s just a look into someone’s mind, someone’s kind who keeps forgetting little things and trying so hard to hold on to her memory.Â
Graphic: Injury/Injury detail, Death, Suicidal thoughts, Gun violence, Dementia, and Confinement