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sheriffrockyraccoon's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
The writing is good. I found that her structure was a little hard to follow at times, nevertheless it was very strong and provided great imagery. My main issues came with characterization and pacing. First, I just did not like Josie. I wanted to, and I understood her perspective, but I found her too stubborn and repetitive to be likable. Also, this story is clearly about the power of women and mothers, but the scenes depicting misogyny were just so black-and-white it felt redundant. I don’t need to be told so explicitly what’s happening is wrong, I’m a woman! I know how to read between the lines!
There was also only one woman of color specifically mentioned, and she was hardly present for the story. This also gave it a white feminism vibe that felt really dated and not fitting to modern feminist movements. Again, while the story and world is so incredibly interesting, Josie’s perspective felt so limited I wonder if a multi-POV would have helped bring it more to life.
Finally, to end on a sort of better note, I loved the last 70-ish pages. The rest of the story lagged for me and I considered DNFing multiple times, but I am happy I didn’t! The end was action-packed, poignant, and perfect for this story. I truly loved those last few pages which helped give it as many stars as I did.
I’d recommend this book to Margaret Atwood fans for sure, especially since it’s reminiscent of The Handmaid’s Tale with its themes of femininity, motherhood, and pregnancy. Maybe this book just wasn’t my cup of tea, as so many reviews seemed to love it, so hopefully my review won’t scare you off if you’re already interested!
Moderate: Animal death, Body horror, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Gun violence, Hate crime, Homophobia, Mental illness, Miscarriage, Misogyny, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Blood, Medical content, Kidnapping, Grief, Religious bigotry, Medical trauma, Stalking, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Fire/Fire injury, Gaslighting, Abandonment, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
Spoilers range from minor to major, just was too lazy to categorize them, sorry!gcot's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.25
It was extremely slow and repetitive, but then rushed through the action. I mean, a woman was shot in the forehead and then resurrected in less than two pages!
The characters are all deeply stereotypical, from the bra burning gay hippie, to the ditzy blond child star to the homeschooled basement weirdo and finally our MC, the over achieving eldest child.
I found the main character deeply unlikable. She is classic first year med student cliche, acting like she was completing groundbreaking research with only 1.5 semesters under her belt. I also find it immensely unrealistic that a curious and analytically minded woman who hyper analyzed how she came into the world, would never think the learn more about the woman who created her. And yes Josie herself admits to never thinking of her mothers life prior to her entry into it.
The biggest issue for me with this book is the plot holes and unrealistic dialogue. The expectation that a four year old child would have such robust memories, and so many at that, is frankly silly. People do not speak to eachother the way they do in this book half the time.
This book could have done with a better editor and some more critical beta readers, because the idea itself is quite interesting.
And an unfair complaint (unfair because the author reasonably might not know this) is one descriptor of their road trip. When driving into Vermont Josie mentions the billboards she passes. This book is set in the 90s. Billboards were banned in Vermont in the 60s.
Moderate: Sexual violence
Minor: Child death
lyx_sq's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Graphic: Child death, Death, Gun violence, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual violence, Medical content, Kidnapping, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, and Fire/Fire injury