brianareads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Moderate: Violence and Murder
Minor: Rape and Drug abuse
sapphic_swiftie's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
one thing that i didn't like though was how confusing the plot was at times. thinking back now having read this book a little while ago, i'm struggling to remember a whole lot of the major plot events. i think this is partially due to the fact that i didn't fully understand everything the first time. the ending especially confused me, but i'm really hoping that the next book with clear some things up. there also felt like there were just so so many characters to keep track of too which also make it difficult at times. despite, these few qualms, i am still eager to read the next book in the series, the case for jamie, (hopefully) sometime soon!!
Graphic: Addiction, Death, Murder, and Violence
Moderate: Drug use, Kidnapping, and Stalking
Minor: Confinement and Rape
teagan105's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Minor: Rape and Sexual assault
lyla_wicks's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Moderate: Injury/Injury detail, Addiction, and Sexual assault
Minor: Drug use, Vomit, and Rape
elizasavannah's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
Moderate: Addiction
Minor: Rape
lilifane's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Hated the ending with a passion.
I'm also a little conflicted about how the rape topic/aftermath is handled. These are teens, of course they don't know how to handle the situation in a healthy way and make lots of mistakes. And I understand why they want to try to resolve the issue on their own, although they are torn between what they want and the trauma. But please, at least consider the possibility of professional help at some point?!
Graphic: Addiction, Drug use, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, Medical content, Murder, and Rape
erin_curry's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Moderate: Violence and Drug use
Minor: Rape
petrarose's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
i’m looking forward to reading the next two and hopefully finding out what actually happened in this one.
Graphic: Murder, Suicide attempt, and Violence
Minor: Rape
ashlightgrayson's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Despite shortcomings in the plot, I appreciated the character development for both Charlotte and Jamie. Charlotte has to grapple with her past trauma and how that affects her ability to enter into a romantic relationship with Jamie. Jamie has to deal with his feelings of inadequacy and jealousy around Holmes that are due to him often selling himself short. He is respectful of her boundaries and abstains from being affectionate with her more than he would want to; however, t is clear that his romantic feelings for Charlotte are strong. I think some people may argue that he idolizes her, but I beg to differ. Jamie and Charlotte argue a lot and he sees her flaws and likes her anyway. I really like their relationship dynamic overall. Other characters observing them see them argue a lot and even comment on it, but in a way it is how they communicate. Their arguments can be very angsty when they are serious, but we get both of their perspectives and it is clear that their inner insecurities are what are causing the miscommunication. I know this will probably annoy some readers, but I would kindly remind them that this is often the cause of conflicts in real life relationships. In addition, they are teenagers who are both still trying to figure things out, so that also helped make me a lot more empathetic towards them. Charlotte in particular is bad at expressing her emotions and it is greatly out of fear of ruining what she has with Jamie. I feel that this made her more human this time around and helped me understand her as a character better.
Spoiler
I should mention that despite Charlotte's character growth, the amount of lying she was willing to do to cover up for her family shows that she definitely still has a lot of growth to do. I'm hoping that we get more insight into what has made her so severely loyal to her family in this unhealthy way. It sees like she did not have the most loving childhood and does not truly understand what true love looks like (platonic or not). I am looking forward to that being explored more in the next book.I'm looking forward to see the continued progression of the relationship between Charlotte and Jamie. Not this author's best work, but I'm hoping it gets better as the series goes on.
Moderate: Addiction, Death, Kidnapping, Murder, Sexual content, Stalking, Suicide attempt, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Chronic illness, Drug abuse, Drug use, Rape, and Vomit
gracefulbooks's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
In this installation in the series, we follow Holmes and Watson as they stay with Holmes's family for the Christmas Holiday, and while there her uncle Leander suddenly disappears and they are once again tasked with figuring out what he was investigating leading up to his disappearance and saving him as well. All while Holmes's mother is also suddenly ill.
I will say I had such a hard time with the first book in this series. I liked it enough but I still struggled a bit and especially disliked it when it became a thing where Watson and she would become lovers. I just genuinely wanted a legit male & female friendship that was nothing more than that. That opinion kind of made the start of this book dreadful for me. I really did not like them as a pairing in that sense and it was as if Charlotte was ALL Jamie thought about for the first quarter of this book and it made it SO hard to get into-I genuinely just don't get it. I don't want the romance there, though I will give Cavallaro some credit because it became more tolerable as this book went on for me. Especially when we saw it from Holmes's perspective because it felt more genuine than Jamie's did for me.
He reads as though he is a massive fan of Charlotte and thinks for some reason he has a chance with her despite her giving very few hints if any at all that she is into him. It just is weird to me and I don't like it. It didn't feel like it was healthy though at some point in the book it felt more....okay? To me??
Moving past that whole shebang I want to say the mystery here felt a bit more put together than the one from the first book. I was able to follow it a bit more and didn't feel like the conclusion was completely far-fetched as I felt the first one was personal and after reading this I kind of understand the first book a bit more. We get more insight into the messed-up relations between the Moriarty's & the Holmes's and what exactly caused a lot of what happened in the first book and what happened in this one.
The motives felt more put together here and that made me appreciate the mystery a bit more.
Spoiler
Though to be frank I still don't understand the whole forgery plot line but I guess the Moriarty's just wanted more money and that's why?I personally left this book wanting to continue the series which I wasn't expecting because I was planning to DNF this series but the way it ended I don't think I can willingly do that now. I would also like to acknowledge that I think Cavallaro tried to rectify some of the problems readers had with the previous book and she actually allowed us to partake more in the mystery-solving process. I appreciate that effort a bunch.
Moderate: Rape and Drug abuse