claudiereads's review
2.0
The blurb made me curious, but despite the rather good writing, I didn’t like this story. The chemistry between Graciela and Trinity was practically non-existent, and their whole relationship felt almost clinical. Way more telling than showing here. Trinity was immature, irrational and ungrateful, and didn’t know what she wanted. Imagining her as a Domme raised my hackles! I can’t imagine what Gracie ever saw in her and what made her take Trinity back…
littlebookterror's review
medium-paced
3.0
I would personally suggest reading Mira's Desire to better understand the situation. I needed more information on what had transpired to fully understand this story.
For such a short story, this truly packs a punch. I truly felt for Trinity's situation and suffered along with her. I also understood Graciela and her hesitations. The time skips were well placed and well chosesn to highlight the perfect moments to understand them better.
I simply wished for more explanation on the inciting incident since it is vital to the story.
For such a short story, this truly packs a punch. I truly felt for Trinity's situation and suffered along with her. I also understood Graciela and her hesitations. The time skips were well placed and well chosesn to highlight the perfect moments to understand them better.
I simply wished for more explanation on the inciting incident since it is vital to the story.
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