tina27596's review
2.0
Good but....
Good but I almost didn’t finish the book due to errors. There were times when the wrong word was used such as ringed instead of rang. In the beginning Lucas said “painful” when the context of the sentence let you know the word should have been “painless”. Pretty big difference in words there! There was a random jump in time when Lucas and Bella were in her room talking about pizza and the pool and suddenly Bella had pizza in her mouth and looked inside when they heard someone arrive. When did they leave her bedroom, go to the pool, order the pizza and when was it delivered? I had to read that section several times because I thought I missed something. The sentences with the random commas were also an issue. As the book went on there were less errors and I did like to storyline so I continued. Giving Book 2 a chance.
Good but I almost didn’t finish the book due to errors. There were times when the wrong word was used such as ringed instead of rang. In the beginning Lucas said “painful” when the context of the sentence let you know the word should have been “painless”. Pretty big difference in words there! There was a random jump in time when Lucas and Bella were in her room talking about pizza and the pool and suddenly Bella had pizza in her mouth and looked inside when they heard someone arrive. When did they leave her bedroom, go to the pool, order the pizza and when was it delivered? I had to read that section several times because I thought I missed something. The sentences with the random commas were also an issue. As the book went on there were less errors and I did like to storyline so I continued. Giving Book 2 a chance.
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